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The Firmament of My Heaven

The Firmament of my Heaven The work, the words The worries, the wits They are lazy today They have been sleeping too long In my body In the broad way of my heart. I think about you in the heavy traffic I lay bare my desire I search the bodies of A vowel, a consonant, a simile An oxymoron, a metaphor To find a two-syllable title I breathe in their mouths With the thoughts I have in mind I whisper into their ears To hear the echoes of the words To compose and feel the sound effect With overflowing ideas in head I touch the curved lips To get you mold Deep in the vault of your mouth I feel you and hear you. +++ March 10, 2014 Form: Free Verse Based on Surrealism Tenth Place Win Contest: Anything Goes by Chris View the contents of the poem on the following site: http://writers-voice.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=1540 (I was interviewed by the site admin)

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Date: 4/13/2014 8:08:00 AM
This is very good Dr. Ram. You have impressed me. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/13/2014 6:17:00 AM
Great poem Dr Ram ! Enjoyed to read and a well placed win !! Congrats !!
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:54:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem . Congrats, Dr.Ram!!
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:33:00 AM
Well written Dr.Ram and congratulations on your win... Verlena
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Date: 4/12/2014 10:57:00 PM
Sweet win Dr. , love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:04:00 PM
Dr Ram, congratulations... Linda
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Date: 4/12/2014 6:51:00 PM
Chris really likes surreal poetry so you did well to enter this one in his contest, Dr. Ram. big congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:54:00 PM
Wow...sorry that's all i have...but wow in a good way...talk about talent...cheers H
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Date: 3/10/2014 1:54:00 PM
Good poem, Dr. Mehta. Flowed nicely and with a highly genuine message--keenly felt.
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Date: 3/10/2014 12:17:00 PM
Doc, I read this aloud twice straight through with ease. How fun. LOVE the FREE VERSE here...great poem. Good luck!
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