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The Fire

Blameless it dances, tame-less it prances, as under a watchful eye it grows. It crackles under the moonlit night, and everywhere sparks take flight. More sticks, more twigs, and up it goes! As majestically it glows. Soon enough, marshmallows are roasted, some are just lightly toasted. So, now, to conclude my tale, I must say this: Fires are beautiful, fires can be a delight! But keep watch, or they will set your yard alight!

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Date: 4/26/2015 2:17:00 PM
awesome! Ashley... this poem like the last person said just flowed greatly! I really like the descriptive words that you used and love all of your poems!!! God bless!
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Date: 4/8/2015 2:42:00 PM
Excellent pen Ashley! Another nice poem, truly enjoyed this one too, dear friend. The rhymes just flow! A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 4/8/2015 9:13:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am new to Poetry Soup, so your comments are very encouraging. Thanks again!

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