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The Finality of Our Love

I feel despondent.
   Am I susceptible to morbid views?
I walk the hard sandy path 
           Where the sky drifts into the sea
As waves roll gently on my feet.
I am oblivious of the inconvenience of all.
    The sun goes to rest.
    I prefer the bright skies.
    I care not of the mellow sinking sunset.    
            For there I’m leashed to your dusk. 

We meet in high street.
An altercation takes place.
I am dragged to a courtroom,
Accused though really innocent.
The magistrate bangs the gavel.
The only witness is called.
          In the mists of your eyes 
I expect to see love.  I see none.
I gave you my all, where is my adulation, 
       my relish, my zeal?

The magistrate looks annoyed.
      This is a simple case.  
      Give each a kiss and be done with it.
We comply reluctantly.  A long lingering kiss.
Meant mainly to appease the magistrate.

The court case is finalized.  No real damage.
I take her out for a drink.
What am I to do with her?
        I do not want her really!
        Release me.  I plead.
        Burn me with your love poison.
I may find some peace.

It is not to be—the finality of love. 
My life will be melancholy forevermore.

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Proxenos Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 10:11 AM
Hi Victor, GREAT DEPTH OF MEANING IN YOUR MESSAGE AND AS ALWAYS, AN ELOQUENTLY WRITTEN POEM. Congrats dear friend. on your win, Hugs - Jennifer
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 11:14 AM
Dear victor, I think this is a very unique take on the prompts! Its very imaginative and creative and clever’ and I absolutely love the flow of your poem too! And I especially love the concept! Excellent as always’ your poems do have that emotional depth too always ~ pleasure reading ~ Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Sending you light always ~
Sands Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 6:14 AM
You have expressed the finality very well with this :)
Winter Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Reading your poem was very emotional. I felt the pain of lost love
Rolland Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:01 PM
great poem, i love the message and justice imagery, thanks poet
Kitchin Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 3:16 AM
Victor, wonderfully penned poem full of emotion. Best for the contest. -hugs
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 1:00 AM
Well penned Victor. You have eloquently used the prompts.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 4:53 PM
this emotional poem grabbed my heart. I sense the gravity of your pain and loss.
Poet Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 1:23 PM
Exquisitely composed poetry. The anguish of losing love is evident in every phrase. An elegant and poignant composition. Wishing you all the best, Victor.
George Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 1:56 AM
The pangs of lost love is felt in each line. A touchingly emotional write. All the best dear Victor.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 1:12 AM
Wow. You put that all together quite cleverly, Victor. Cool one!!
Daniel Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 11:22 PM
Very good poem on lost love, Victor, one can feel the pain:)
Hind Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 10:32 PM
very sad
Edmonds  Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 9:56 PM
Dear Victor, only you can make the darkness bright. The memories of your lost love hold the magic, to calm you when tears fall automatic… Beryl
Buehler Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 9:37 PM
Victor, your story about a turbulent love affair is wonderfully well wrought and interesting. Best wishes for a contest win. :)
Anaya Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:28 PM
Victor, this is a unique piece on loves start and finale, heated blends of frustration it seems, all Iines collaborated beautifully. Strong entry. Blessings, )
Loving Iii Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 4:57 PM
Fantasy in reverse.
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 10:28 AM
Quite an emotional write Victor, it wasn't meant to be. Tom
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:48 AM
Hello Victor, carries that unmistakable blend of ache and clarity that only you can render. Victor, you’ve captured the melancholy of release with such honest restraint. A powerful, beautifully wrought piece, my friend. Blessings, Daniel
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