The Finality of Love

He walked along the cobbled streets,
a terrible freezing gloaming, frosted air.
Snow crystal upon snow crystal
dampen the arctic gelidity: 
his head was chilled, his teeth chattered 
and frostbite raked his fingertips. 

He turned, shuffling into a side street.
Fear clutched his heart, but he felt valiant
and entered boldly her heated abode. 
She waited for him, slouching on her sofa.
He was quick to notice her stern face,  
a contrast to her gentle eyes,
that shone like the silvery stars. 

Could he detect some pathos there?
Uncertain, he knew how unpredictable she was.
A stunning figure on show for him.

He pleaded: 
“Shield me from the freezing night.” 
Her cat-like smile formed on her ruby lips. 
“Am I that unwelcome, my sweet? 
Grant me a few moments of bliss. 
just one ruddy, wanton, lingering kiss, 
Then I'll be off and leave you in peace, 
the peace I shall never find.” 

It was not to be—the finality of love. 
The air outside was colder still.
His life would be melancholy forevermore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Edmonds  Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 2:53 PM
An incredible write Victor, enjoyed the read, love doesn’t always work out, maybe for the best sometimes… Beryl
DiMino Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 6:58 AM
The heart often destined to roam...the spirit of Love a fickle company at best where human motivation and understanding are driving forces. As usual, a very engaging write. Well done my friend.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 2:03 AM
Aw a bittersweet mod ballad like narrative poem , fabulously penned wow! Poor guy couldn't get his last kiss. Kudos!
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Mysterious and sad. You always write with great description
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:52 PM
awesome imagery, Victor. I enjoyed reading your poem as the story unfolded. Outstanding.
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:21 PM
So sad! Sometimes I wonder about those that I see on the streets, what was their story? Lost love, lost families, and how it happened. You've written this so well, bringing up such clear imaging, like watching it play out. Very well written Victor.
Somadas Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 11:05 PM
a classical romantic melancholy.. I liked it Victor..
George Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:55 PM
I am eager to know of her reaction. You have wound the poem at a point of surprise. Did she deny his wish? Beautifully penned. A very emotive poem.
Hind Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:29 PM
A sad tale of manipulation to me, sorry for the character
Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:30 PM
Didn't you find my Soup Mail dated 11-9? I've been unable to comment due to a hand injury. I was able to post poems w/ the help of Tim and Kyle which was a combination of frustration and comedy. Prior to that I wondered/worried where you were but learned about your eye surgery. Hope you are good??? I'm much better. Your emotive poem is most sad in the best possible poetic way, a total feel poem. MISSED YOU
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Longing can be unbearable. Fantastic imagery/setting. I can feel the cold. Hugs…warm hugs, my friend!
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Well, this one took me on a ride emotional roller coaster. I really don't know who the villain was here. Is the villain the man who had been drinking or the wife at home who was a real unpredictable person. I guess I will never know. I can make it go either way. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
May Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Love was just as cold as the "frosted air", Very nicely penned Victor
Poet Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 4:15 AM
This excellent poem generates a captivating scene with a strong story flow and stunning imagery. The backdrop and feelings are nicely developed, making it engaging.
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