The Final Vow

The Final Vow

When finally the long shadow crosses my path
the wind carries away the new morn's dew
I shall then abandon my weary and dark wrath
against my tortured, imagined image of you .

Shall you notice this my change on that fateful day
A bare, broken heart at last thus mended
The end in which my silence holds its greatest sway
the black results of the promised love you rescinded.

My love, hear my last destined words to you
this cry to heal your bitter heart
This the last honorable, loving thing I can do
before forever our shattered souls part.

As these beautiful trees witness this my final vow
You may thus see, the true depth of my love now

R.J. Lindley
Nov. 9th, 1976
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kalicharan Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 11:05 PM
You seem to be the Sonnet King of PS. I really do enjoy reading them and soon I shall have to try one of my own. Jenni
Vaso Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Robert this is one of the best sonnets I have read a Fav!!!!! :) A7
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Beautifully penned sad sonnet Robert - I am in awe of your talent when writing this form:-) I've just posted my attempt at a sonnet for Eve's contest:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Lovely, Robert! Emotions ride high!
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 12:11 PM
A heartfelt warmth of love poem, I enjoyed reading. Robert. Hugs Eve
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