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The Final Vow

The Final Vow When finally the long shadow crosses my path the wind carries away the new morn's dew I shall then abandon my weary and dark wrath against my tortured, imagined image of you . Shall you notice this my change on that fateful day A bare, broken heart at last thus mended The end in which my silence holds its greatest sway the black results of the promised love you rescinded. My love, hear my last destined words to you this cry to heal your bitter heart This the last honorable, loving thing I can do before forever our shattered souls part. As these beautiful trees witness this my final vow You may thus see, the true depth of my love now R.J. Lindley Nov. 9th, 1976

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Date: 9/19/2016 11:05:00 PM
You seem to be the Sonnet King of PS. I really do enjoy reading them and soon I shall have to try one of my own. Jenni
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Date: 8/19/2016 11:00:00 PM
Robert this is one of the best sonnets I have read a Fav!!!!! :) A7
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Date: 8/19/2016 9:12:00 AM
Beautifully penned sad sonnet Robert - I am in awe of your talent when writing this form:-) I've just posted my attempt at a sonnet for Eve's contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2016 8:18:00 PM
Lovely, Robert! Emotions ride high!
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Date: 8/17/2016 12:11:00 PM
A heartfelt warmth of love poem, I enjoyed reading. Robert. Hugs Eve
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