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The final prayer

On that day, the heavens split in silence, and from the void descended a clock, not of metal, not of clay, but of time’s very flesh, beating between us like a heart slowly fading. I looked upon it without fear, because I knew; endings do not arrive with cries, but with a silence that weighs heavier than any unspoken word. You were fire, and I, merely a candle burning. I was your home, but you longed to be a storm. You became my storm, while I searched for a sky that might forgive me. And thus, time decided for us. It placed us on the scale of eternity and let the seconds part us, one by one, until we were nothing but strangers, draped in memories that no longer belonged to us. But I will not curse you. I will not let your shadow press upon me like an unhealed wound. I leave you there, in that place where light no longer reaches me. One day, the clock stopped. And instead of fear, I felt only release. Not because time had ended, but because love should not be a burden carried unto death. Perhaps somewhere, beneath another sky, under a different God, we were written on the same page. Perhaps there, no clocks exist, and there are no farewells. But here, in this life, we were only a prayer left unanswered. And now, at last, I can say: Amen.

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Date: 7/2/2025 5:21:00 AM
I read thru your series, not sure if this is the finale but feels like a possible stand alone. Anyway you're a decent poet and quite obviously a deep thinker. Nice to meet ya
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Florin Lacatus
Date: 7/2/2025 5:50:00 AM
Thank you kindly for walking through the silence of my words. Whether The Final Prayer is the end or merely a threshold, I do not know myself. Sometimes poems end before the soul does, and sometimes they keep writing us long after we’ve placed the final “Amen.” I’m grateful for your presence among these verses. And if I appear to be a deep thinker, it’s only because the wounds of time have made philosophers of us all. Nice to meet you too Tom, and may your journey be kind, and your silences full of meaning.

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