The final letter

my mind does not understand 
when you are sending me feelings
through the mill of the mind 
no matter how loud that would be, 
wouldn't focus the world 
twenty four hours of bookmarks 
left in the orphanage of my veins
just realise, 
blue saw by the God 
gives birth to the utopian therapy 
whole world
waits for incoming sender 
feel the green full of algae
with each step
makes way to the sea of dreams.

Your formidable intention 
cure my eyes 
excites with Saturday night lyrics
those revelations 
embalms your body as a bouquet of basil
blue and green leaves my soul 
barely discover the blind lines 
an imaginary window  
alter out the silver of the deer fur 
through the gloomy thicket of winter 
after all time 
won't be another chance for:
I LOVE YOU.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/13/2023 3:56:00 PM
Those last three words says it all Elena. Lucky the fellow to whom they are directed
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/13/2023 4:05:00 PM
Awww that's sweet
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 12/13/2023 4:00:00 PM
To the Universe. Poetry is the freedom of feelings, here we are lucky to explore more and more <3 The power of my love can't be held in a reality where is more about YOU and less about feelings. The poetry is my fidelity <3 many hugs, Tom. You are special for me
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