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The final letter

my mind does not understand  when you are sending me feelings through the mill of the mind  no matter how loud that would be, wouldn't focus the world  twenty four hours of bookmarks left in the orphanage of my veins just realise, blue saw by the God gives birth to the utopian therapy whole world waits for incoming sender  feel the green full of algae with each step makes way to the sea of dreams. Your formidable intention  cure my eyes  excites with Saturday night lyrics those revelations  embalms your body as a bouquet of basil blue and green leaves my soul  barely discover the blind lines  an imaginary window   alter out the silver of the deer fur through the gloomy thicket of winter  after all time won't be another chance for: I LOVE YOU.

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Date: 12/13/2023 3:56:00 PM
Those last three words says it all Elena. Lucky the fellow to whom they are directed
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/13/2023 4:05:00 PM
Awww that's sweet
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 12/13/2023 4:00:00 PM
To the Universe. Poetry is the freedom of feelings, here we are lucky to explore more and more <3 The power of my love can't be held in a reality where is more about YOU and less about feelings. The poetry is my fidelity <3 many hugs, Tom. You are special for me

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