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I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind Distracted, I am just a rover. For I have wandered in a field of fog I cannot see or feel or know Where I am going until the air had cleared And a vast land displayed a great chateau. Large mushroom like trees grow here and there. With palms swishing lightly in the lawn, But in the middle elves stand on guard A beautiful woman is tied to a pole like a pawn. I roll the magic rocks and a nasty sound blared. The elves disappear and I quickly untie the beauty. We run out into the fog and find a rocky patch. She is hungry. The rocks yield berries fruity. Danger lurk above as an eagle soared She magically got a bow and shot down the bird Others appear the fugitives must flee. A unicorn appears. They climb upon the magic horse and spurred. Now I have only one magic rock: what to do? I wish to be back in my home and in laughter We arrive safe and sound. We will be married And you know what: we live happily ever after.

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Date: 2/21/2025 3:10:00 AM
Romntic tales and you Victor go hand in hand, you tell and write them with such a passion and a fearsome spirit, this one being no exception. A magical story to be read and reread. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/21/2025 12:48:00 AM
Hello Victor, good luck in the contest with this beautifully romantic write. It was an enjoyable read. Wishing you a fantastic weekend, my friend.
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Date: 2/20/2025 4:14:00 PM
what a magical romantic tale Victor, you are such a talented story teller, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2025 3:23:00 PM
Oh it's a story. I had to read twice. Good entrance.
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Date: 2/20/2025 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic. And it sounds like you're so much in love that you will promise to do the dishes. Poem has terrific fantasy. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/20/2025 1:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative write/story with a great ending. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away..................
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Date: 2/20/2025 1:14:00 PM
very magical, Victor!
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Date: 2/20/2025 5:20:00 AM
I enjoyed this. Nice to read today. Well done :)
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Date: 2/20/2025 5:04:00 AM
Victor, I am so happy to read of the happy ending! Your magical tale has lovely imagery and it was so easy to imagine the entire story unfold! Good Luck!!
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Date: 2/20/2025 3:56:00 AM
Dear victor, you are such an amazing writer and one that rhymes so well too! I absolutely loved the flow and depth of what you’ve conveyed as well as the descriptive nature of your poem. I especially love the lines, “I wish to be back in my home and in laughter We arrive safe and sound. We will be married And you know what: we live happily ever after.” Love such endings, soul warming! Really! Pleasure reading your poem. Hope you are doing well. Best wishes also for the contest. Sending you light
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Date: 2/19/2025 4:22:00 PM
Wonder and enchantment fill this tale of love in a land of magic. It's a stellar contest contender! Very interesting and enjoyable. :)
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Date: 2/19/2025 12:18:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. A strong tale you have woven. A great imagination or is it true? Sara K
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Date: 2/19/2025 11:45:00 AM
Your creativity is so powerful that it transfers us to fantastic areas. Away from the existing reality, it is an amazing tale of a rover's escapades. Very well done. Sorry, I also have computer troubles, but I am waiting for a new laptop, so I will read your poems soon.
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Date: 2/19/2025 8:52:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Victor ... imaginative and vivid - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/19/2025 8:23:00 AM
You're the hero of the hour Victor, a magical verse. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/19/2025 6:50:00 AM
A great story! Magnificent, dear Poet! You’re the hero!
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Date: 2/19/2025 5:21:00 AM
Lovely flight of fantasy, my friend. Best of all, a very happy ending. Love your writing!
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Date: 2/19/2025 3:42:00 AM
Away from the present reality it is a thrilling tale of adventure of a rover.Very nicely done. Wish you the best
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Date: 2/19/2025 3:35:00 AM
Your imagination is so vibrant that it takes us into magical lands. I cannot even think to see such sights even in my wildest dreams. Don't worry about your single magical rock. You have got the best boon. All the Best, dear Victor. I too have been quite busy, so don't regret about your late response.
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