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The Fifth Season

Life, a miracle too deep to fathom And each man adds to the cosmic beat. Passing through stages four, Human life completes its cyclic round, Beginning with childhood, Skipping through youth and middle age, And ending in crippling old age, Precisely as the seasons of the year! Each stage has its thrills and fills Marked by distinct traits If childhood is an age of play Youth, a transition from play to work Middle age- a time when passions are tempered Old age, a gradual transfer from sweat to rest! Life thus sprouts, blooms, fades, and ebbs away As plants through the seasons four! Each stage is a link in the chain of life And birth and death, just doorways in and out Life after completing its earthly round, Through vexing trials and waning joys, Shall enter a world beyond the reach of thought. Through the gates of death, as we pass, Yet to another phase of life, we do enter. As from sleep, we wake to the afterlife, The fifth season, the close of all seasons! No more suffering, no more discontent With a place to dwell where the choir of angels sweetly sing Where we shall roam non corporeal as free spirits Where we will not see yet another season! November. 4.2022 ~ Placed Second~ The Fifth Season Poetry Contest Sponsor-Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 11/27/2022 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on your top win! Lovely write!!
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:30:00 PM
So well done Valsa! So many brilliant images of passing through each passage to find that "fifth" season, the one we cannot escape, just waiting in eternal joy. Congratulations! Blessings sweet friend.
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Date: 11/15/2022 8:56:00 PM
Amazing thoughts, Valsa, congratulations:)
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Date: 11/15/2022 3:48:00 AM
The concept of comparing the fifth season to the very eternal life, is, indeed, great. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/15/2022 12:33:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I'm so delighted with this perspective of yours, especially: "Through the gates of death, as we pass, Yet to another phase of life, we do enter. As from sleep, we wake to the afterlife, The fifth season, the close of all seasons!" God bless you.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/15/2022 3:45:00 AM
So glad about your comment. You enjoyed my poem as you are one who focuses more on the fifth season of life. May God bless you for being engaged in the work of glorifying God !
Date: 11/14/2022 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations Valsa. A very well written poem and a worthy winner.
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Date: 11/15/2022 3:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot Wendy. Congratulations .... you too are a winner !
Date: 11/4/2022 2:54:00 PM
We pass through life knowing full well the good and evil we enjoy or suffer. And now we have a fifth season.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/15/2022 3:40:00 AM
Yes, we have a fifth season when the virtuous shall no more suffer from wind or rain, heat or cold
Date: 11/4/2022 8:27:00 AM
Valsa, I really enjoy reading your poems, and I think you have an intriguing point of view. It fits very well with the overall idea of the contest. We will finally arrive at a place where there is no longer any need to struggle or be miserable. An illuminating travelogue across the centuries and phases of life. Best wishes.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/15/2022 3:39:00 AM
We all hope to enter that place of joy once we complete our cycle of seasons on earth. Thanks a lot dear Lasaad . Your comments matter to me much !
Date: 11/4/2022 5:43:00 AM
An insightful journey through stages of life, Valsa. Aptly done for the contest theme. No more suffering, no more discontent--we get there eventually. Skillfully delivered, as always.
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Date: 11/15/2022 3:36:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Vijay ! Your blessings and kind words are much appreciated....

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