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The Fifth Element

The sea Seems to stretch for infinity There are sailing war ships upon the sea Even among roaring cannons they still shine with beauty The battle of two great navies takes place on the sea Blue Falcon the commander of smaller navy Kalandar commander of opposing navy Each of the two is tempting destiny Blue Falcon looks at enemy ships angrily It is they who turned his life to misery What worse they stole eye that to Falcon is holy Stronger than any army Blue Falcon has smaller navy And is slightly less experienced in sea But if bold plan takes hold path to victory He can see The eye is physical manifestation of dream of divinity The fifth element where first can be One of four on Earth, or the element of destiny Or any other element being first the eye last element would be The same for every base it would be The ultimate in universe mesmerizing in majesty True essence of all it offers power freedom and longevity The Falcon crew fights bravely Even if some are pirates scourge of the sea But fifth element deciding factor will be And getting it back is the key Extraordinarily As blue falcon comes close to Kalandars’ vessel eventually Facing each other’s broad side they will be Falcon on blue falcon shoulder is not irony And that falcon the will be Savior of whole blue falcon’s navy As it sacredly Takes flight above the fire drenched sea And in its talons it grabs the eye which property Of Blue Falcon is rightfully As fifth element back with Blue Falcon will be His navy Will score great victory And Kalandar will be forced to flee But it is Blue falcon’s soul that straightened his destiny Despite his many faults it showed incorruptibility Thanks to it and his pet he won this victory And his presence is great but his spirit was always free

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