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The Fiddler and the Frog

Once upon a time
On a billabong
a frog croaked out his billabong song

It was harmony of nature
The stars looked on
And all was peaceful - nothing was wrong 

At the height of the full moon 
A fiddler appeared 
And razed the night with his off key tune

The frog croaked louder
the stars looked on 
The fiddler kept playing on and on 

But something was wrong
Something was wrong
Nature’s harmony was gone 

So the fiddler switched 
With a knowing smile
And all the while and all the while 

He plucked his bow
In rhythm with the frog
And the stars looked down

The stars looked down

Contest: The Fiddler And The Frog
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:42 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page to say congratulations and let me know I placed in your contest. Sara
Delaney Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Hi Sara: my pleasure. ‘ Thanks for stopping by my page today. SuZ
Slaughter Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Well...that's a billabong for you. Love the illustration, Suzanne, and BOL in the contest.Y8J
Delaney Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Thanks Jim: Glad you enjoyed. SuZ
George Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 8:20 AM
An interesting story well told.... ! Finally harmony was achieved .... ! All the best in the contest dear Suzanne !
Delaney Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Many thanks, Valsa: Glad you enjoyed the story for Craig’s contest. Best, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 1:48 PM
They achieved harmony in the end. Enjoyed your poem, SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Thanks Vijay: Always appreciate your kind comments. SuZ
Cheney Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:10 PM
I agree with Janice this is quite creative. I really like the title.
Delaney Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Kenneth: I appreciate your kind words. Best, SuZ
Canerdy Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:02 PM
LOVE it, Suzanne~~so creative! Janice
Delaney Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 9:39 AM
I appreciate your welcome comment, Janice. Contests always help to get me writing again. SuZ
Mcconnell Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 11:13 AM
A lovely tale so poetically well told Suzanne, with great imagery and insightful line of thought too. Blessings always,Gordon
Delaney Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 11:45 AM
So happy you enjoyed this one, Gordon: I haven’t heard frog songs in so long my Muse was ready, Cheers, SuZ
Volumes Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Well done Suzanne. A Ribittng tale.
Delaney Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Thanks Wendy. So nice to have you visit. SuZ
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