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The Fiddler and the Frog

Once upon a time
On a billabong
a frog croaked out his billabong song

It was harmony of nature
The stars looked on
And all was peaceful - nothing was wrong 

At the height of the full moon 
A fiddler appeared 
And razed the night with his off key tune

The frog croaked louder
the stars looked on 
The fiddler kept playing on and on 

But something was wrong
Something was wrong
Nature’s harmony was gone 

So the fiddler switched 
With a knowing smile
And all the while and all the while 

He plucked his bow
In rhythm with the frog
And the stars looked down

The stars looked down

Contest: The Fiddler And The Frog
Sponsor: Craig Cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/8/2023 6:34:00 AM
Aww I like this. It has a nursery rhyme feel to it. As good as humans can get musically, we could never hope to match the rhythms and melodies found in nature, as your fiddler discerned
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/8/2023 6:56:00 AM
That is so true, Tom: I didn’t get a place in the contest but it is all about the exercise for me. A placement is. Bonus, thanks for your visit. Awesome, SuZ
Date: 3/9/2023 1:42:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page to say congratulations and let me know I placed in your contest. Sara
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/10/2023 2:05:00 PM
Hi Sara: my pleasure. ‘ Thanks for stopping by my page today. SuZ
Date: 1/27/2023 10:44:00 AM
Well...that's a billabong for you. Love the illustration, Suzanne, and BOL in the contest.Y8J
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/31/2023 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Jim: Glad you enjoyed. SuZ
Date: 1/21/2023 8:20:00 AM
An interesting story well told.... ! Finally harmony was achieved .... ! All the best in the contest dear Suzanne !
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/21/2023 9:36:00 AM
Many thanks, Valsa: Glad you enjoyed the story for Craig’s contest. Best, SuZ
Date: 1/20/2023 1:48:00 PM
They achieved harmony in the end. Enjoyed your poem, SuZ.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/20/2023 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Vijay: Always appreciate your kind comments. SuZ
Date: 1/20/2023 12:10:00 PM
I agree with Janice this is quite creative. I really like the title.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2023 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Kenneth: I appreciate your kind words. Best, SuZ
Date: 1/20/2023 12:02:00 PM
LOVE it, Suzanne~~so creative! Janice
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/21/2023 9:39:00 AM
I appreciate your welcome comment, Janice. Contests always help to get me writing again. SuZ
Date: 1/20/2023 11:13:00 AM
A lovely tale so poetically well told Suzanne, with great imagery and insightful line of thought too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/20/2023 11:45:00 AM
So happy you enjoyed this one, Gordon: I haven’t heard frog songs in so long my Muse was ready, Cheers, SuZ
Date: 1/20/2023 10:50:00 AM
Well done Suzanne. A Ribittng tale.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/20/2023 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Wendy. So nice to have you visit. SuZ
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