The Few Who Conquer the Beast

Ah! The beast rolls his tongue in your blame
he knows all actions and pretensions that
cause you shame
Too afraid to face your shame, you play his game.
Thinking you get away with it
the beast knows when your hell is legit
and he takes you from inside 
Steals your pride. He owns you,
don't you see- you can't fight eternity.
Praying is the selfish way to keep the beast at bay
but eventually he finds you
eventually he owns you.
Few, honored, few revered
few people have nothing to fear.
Only if one can spiritually conquer the beast-
Few shall taste the sweet fruits of Heaven's feast-
Less you conquer your personal beast.


Motif- Philosophical
By A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Deschler Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 4:08 PM
This is quite powerful and inspiring. I was very impressed with this poem. Very well done, Amy! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind comments on my poem. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:11 PM
YOu sure did do a great entry for philosophical motif, Amy. I really like this one. Congrats for your win too.
Kiser Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 10:33 AM
It is a difficult thing to conquer your beasts...well done.
Callus Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Defying and winning over the enemy within us...// Congrats on placing // paul
Oyewole Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Way to go!! Congrats on the win!!!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Amy congrats on your great win ! Great idea n poem indeed !!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:07 AM
- Amy, congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Fantastic! Our worst enemy is usually ourselves. Congrats on your win
Kayode Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Amy.
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, amy
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 9:23 PM
WOW,THIS IS STUNNING BEYOND MEASURE!!! You are a true poet darling!!!
Clarke Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 2:04 AM
A though provoking, awe invoking and i must add .. sublime piece amy! :-)
Bdosa Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 5:14 PM
great line FEW PEOPLE HAVE NOTHING TO FEAR.... yep, we are are guilty and victims of our very own guilt. Nice work.
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Amy. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
Anderson Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Nice job....Jimmy
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 1:14 PM
The gift card is bought..let me know who your first place winner is and the address if u want me to send it out from here or mail it to u.. either works for me.. hope u are having a happy weekend... luv..
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:15 AM
This is deep and chilling, Amy. You summed it up nicely in the last line. We have to conquer our personal beasts! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Many congratulations Amy on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Amy
Freeman Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 4:43 PM
Few there be that do, conquer their personal beasts, Amy, in this life. Congratulations on an exceptional write, in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:28 PM
HEy ..AWESOME Amy congrats on your winning poem in Carol's contest.. a super superior write and excellent win.. for u my friend.. enjoy another momentous victory today..luv..
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Amy. Love, Carol
Walters Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:55 AM
This sure rings a bell with me- so very true. We all have our own personal beasts to contend with and its a personal battle no one can win for us, its all up to us. I love the scattered rhyme, gives it such a nice feel to a potent message! Kris
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 8:21 PM
Well all's well that will end well Awesome Amy.. the poets have perked up a bit.. chi ching works..haha.. see just a little while and the light bulb goes off..haha.. am going to judge on Sunday .. luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 7:44 PM
SOUP MAIL in a few minutes.. composing my thoughts..luv..
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