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The Fever Spreads I am slipping. Not slowly but faster than expected. I wanted it to go better. I made a plan and have a goal. It has not worked out. Writing, penning, grinning... Crying, sighing, and not dying. Words, dancing across my desk on fire. Some have already drowned, and I have not even filled my glass, with wine or water. Emotions doing battle, laughing and swimming on a lake, somewhere else... not here. "Come back, and take me... with you." A feather out of ink, a quill without blood, to spare the wicked and the good, from boredom. Flicking boogers, eating crickets, and wondering how many people are waiting at the door, of the cell, they have put me in? Are the walls made of brick and mortar, or even paper... like the tigers in china, that come in many colors, and have no teeth to bite, only gums to chew...? The few remaining pieces of my brain, left after the party, that should have taken place, at the docks, have pooled together, and become a new species of wild animal, trying to get out of the cage. Oh my, worse yet... this is beginning to make sense.

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Date: 1/9/2020 5:15:00 AM
You had me spinning with wonder, and reeling with the magnificence of this write, Ann. I am diving back in to read it again. I suspect it is going onto my FAVE list.
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Date: 1/9/2020 9:23:00 AM
Hugs and more hugs... ty friend. Ann
Date: 1/8/2020 8:45:00 PM
i like this journey with your words...very creative... we don't always reach the goals when planned, but eventually... keep writing...i will keep reading...we will break you free from those cells :) hugs
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Date: 1/8/2020 9:23:00 PM
A key would be a nice start. LOL... hugs my friend. A wonderful day to you. Ann
Date: 1/8/2020 6:41:00 PM
Imaginative and very creative Ann. I enjoyed the bits of mystery you wove into this piece! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/8/2020 6:55:00 PM
Ever you are so kind... flowers to your door with tiny butter flies.. that both dance and sing... :) Ann

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