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The Feral Me- My Spirit Animal

I praise myself- a 'feral' animal,
so like you, Elephant- majestic, wild;
your dedication to herd families
has influenced me since I was a child.

Like you, dear Elephant, instincts abound:
a mother, matriarch surely I am,
consumed with 'tribal' harmony, like you,
fierce guardian- yet, gentle as a lamb.

Brave elephant, devoted to a fault,
my sense of duty matches yours for sure.
Connected still, and leading when I can,
so that like you, my kindred will endure.

Like you, a power animal, I'm strong
for young ones of my 'herd', and elders too.
My mental 'tusks' plow through life's challenges
and make it easier to help them through.

My empathy and telepathic sense,
like you, attune me to familial needs.
Staunch Elephant, your deep connectedness
and cogent, native skills inspire my deeds.

As imitation mimics flattery,
you, Elephant, I've followed many ways.
Your species has survived billions of years;
that 'feral' part of me- mimes you in praise.


June 15, 2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: A Poem Honoring Spirituality Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
Judged: 05/07/2020

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Feral
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 08/10/2018

~2nd Place~
Contest: Favorite Animal In The World
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Judged: 06/04/2018

~9th Place~
Premiere Contest: Spirit Guides
Sponsor: White Wolf
Judged: 06/23/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Awesome poem, Sandra. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Carber Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Congrats Sandra on your win!
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 10:13 AM
You have found so many ways to relate to your spirit animal with your strength, resilience, and fierce loyalty to family. Lovely in message, rhyme and flow. Well done, and congrats on your win ~ John
Ashley Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Your tender toughness shines in this amazing personification, Sandra. So many beautifully expressive lines like; 'My mental 'tusks' plow thru life's challenges' - such grand poetic imagery and a brilliant nod to your dear elephant. They are so inspiring as is your marvelous poem. Congratulations on another excellent win with this exceptional piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gentry Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again! Well done!
Haight Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Back with much deserved congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Beautifully done Sandra, we should all aspire to such heights...
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so much, John! Much appreciated! Sandra
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 3:29 PM
So perceptive and warm a write, Sandra--well-deserving of a trophy win. :) gw
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Gerson. I appreciate your supportive comments very much. Sandra
Gentry Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra! I enjoyed reading your poem of characteristic comparisons. A unique and profound poem
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Hi, Susan. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and like the comparisons. Thanks so much for your visit and uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 11:40 AM
I love the way you compared the elephant's qualities to your own motherly instincts. Superbly done, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved podium win.
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Thanks, Line, for your lovely comments and for the great contest. I appreciate my placement and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Warrior Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Congrats!!! Sandra...beautiful as always...god bless...^WW^
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2017 at 9:17 PM
wow, I love yours, Sandra. You did yours kind of the way I did mine, relating the characteristics of the animal with your own personality. I was thinking I'd see more poems doing it that way. I love the elephant and it did not even enter my mind when I was thinking up elephants but I think its spirit is much like that of the small turtle!! Congrats for your win.
Smith Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Nobility and honesty personified. Family first, what's not to admire...
Turner Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Mrs Sandra, it simply isn't fair for you to be so talented. I know I will always get a quality poem when I come to read. Good luck.
Krampe Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Great choice and depiction of spirit animal. Elephants are awesome. Good luck in the contest.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 1:47 PM
Awesome write! You do this noble beast justice. Definitely an animal spirit to aspire to.
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