The Fellow In the Trenches

When the battle is won, 'tis the general who claims the laurel wreath.
Seldom is lavish praise bestowed upon the lowly ranks beneath.
But it's the valiant fellow in the trenches with his bayonet and gun,
Who bears the brutal brunt of battle to see the victory won!

In all the countless conflicts since biblical time began,
'Tis the lieutenants and sergeants who execute the battle plan.
Generals concoct grandiose schemes from the comfort of a bunker,
While the fellow in the trenches from bomb and shell must hunker!

His home is a burrow in the ground, dug to comply with regulations.
There he tries to sleep, keep socks dry and eat his meager rations.
His helmet becomes a lavatory to brush his teeth and shave.
It also serves as a dandy tub for taking and occasional lave!

He foregoes the "comfort" of home now and then to take a stroll,
Trudging thro' mud, sleet and snow on a hazardous night patrol,
Gingerly plodding thro' fields of mines, adding tension to his woe.
Returning to his barren hole, how he pines for a steaming cup o' joe!

There's no relief from the constant din of battle or the cannons' roar.
He knows all too well the horrible gore and agony of war.
It takes cooks, artillerymen, "tankies" and all to see the victory won,
But it's the courageous fellow in the trenches who really "gits 'er done".

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 7:16 AM
I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Robert. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol
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January 31, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations Robert H. on your Honorable Mention in The Rambling Poet’s Courage Poetry contest with these heartfelt and wise words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann
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January 30, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations Robert onyour win in the contest. Love, Carol
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January 30, 2010 at 7:58 AM
NAILED IT, Robert!..... Awesome. Big winner in my book and should be in every citizen's book. Congratulations my friend!-Robert
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 4:03 AM
Thank you Robert for this poem and telling it like it is. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
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January 24, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Let's hear it for the "fellow in the trenches." Great tribute. Thanks for sharing.
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