The Fear

I stopped - quietened my breath 
to a merest ration of air 
so as to isolate 
the sound I heard coming 
from where two glowing eyes
peered out of the dark.

It was as if a fear
had found a form to possess
and from a distance 
observe me to find 
an opening 
through which to enter.

Reason had me pulling
the moment apart
to see what would fit
a name and thus trap 
the unexplained 
in a cage of fact.

But whatever it was 
had quietly disappeared 
and left me there
uneasy, troubled by the notion 
that it had found a way
to infiltrate air.

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Date: 8/5/2024 7:09:00 AM
Hello Paul, Well inked the unsettling power of the unknown to create unrealistic fear at times. I have many clients who fear the future and the possibilities of negative outcomes. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/6/2024 3:00:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Daniel. The age is perhaps characterised by this underlying sense of fear, often going unlabelled. Take care my friend, Paul
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