The Fawn's Eyes

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Sun has given us some of its traits~the fawns have given us their eyes.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 1/28/2022 4:10:00 PM

A telltale look, Lasaad, naught one of intrigue, but a surprising alarm, whereto, escape is heeded, but not before inspiration! Bravo my friend, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/27/2022 7:35:00 AM

An interesting one to ponder its beauty!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/27/2022 7:15:00 AM

There is so much of nature that is beautiful, including those dark eyes. Lovely indeed, Lasaad. Enjoy your day, Evelyn

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/26/2022 11:09:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, A beautiful picture and such hauntingly beautiful eyes, so mesmerizing yet uncouth poachers chase them, kill them and sell their meat for people to eat, so sad. Blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/26/2022 6:26:00 AM

Great one Lasaad, those dark lines under the eyes are supposed to help reduce the suns glare, a lot of outdoor sportsmen use them, learn from the animals, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2022 1:28:00 AM

Loved this. Small deer are always fascinating.