The Fate of Ardent Prayers

To eyes that see spiritually,
prayers at their most ardent
appear like random meteors
or lightening flashes,
ascending suddenly
amidst the myriad of points of light,
creations' more common invocations.

Burgeoning in sky as glitter dreams
or solemn supplications, and some
as fervent pleas from dangers' depths,
they rise and soar. . .
to the glorious celestial door.
Seraphs at the portals,
besieged by beautiful entreaties,
strive to answer each and every one,
but heaven's ways can be mysterious. . .

Ardent prayers unanswered
drift back down,
returned not to their supplicants,
but rather to earth's angels
clothed in flesh,
who prompted by the Spirit,
and at the time ordained,
help fulfill the Father's will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jones Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this poem! Fav for me! So glad it was featured on soup this June! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:29 PM
Thanks so much. And thanks for the Prince contest win
Watt Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 7:33 PM
I like the phrase, "creations' more common invocations." Really nice imagery with stars, lightning, and angels as messengers of prayers. Great spiritual vocabulary and message!
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Very much depth in this poem--kashinath
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Joe Flach's contest "A Poem That Doesn't Rhyme". Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Warm congrats Andrea on your win. Beautiful poem, well deserved. love, shar xoxo
Adeite Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Joe’s contest. your write was great! May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
Haick Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Awesome write, Andrea! My congratulations to you! I guess we all see things differently, but this is beautiful and inspirational. Love, Audrey
Johnson Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Lovely and meaningful words. What a beautiful idea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congrats on your HM in Joe's contest Andrea... the other winners are posted if u want to look.. enjoy your big honor my friend.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
Austin Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Congrats on this selection. I missed this one. You believe, evidently, as I do - there are angels here on Earth, maybe a little more than flesh and blood. Love, Dave
Foster Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 6:36 PM
How did I miss this one? Congratulations on all three of your marvelous entries. I think my favourite is 'Strangler's Wood' Sincere good luck...Luv Margaret
Knop Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Congrats for making it into the first round with this powerful poem...Wish you a great week! Gert
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April 4, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poem being futured this week, Andrea! Yes, prayers are essential in our life to make our trust and faith ef in God grow. Have a Blessed and Happy Easter. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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March 22, 2010 at 12:09 PM
A very intresting poem. I do like the inspiration worded in your poem--answer each and every one..I like that line the most .I like to think God works things to his plan. If we do no't get answers the way we pray..Enjoyed
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February 16, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Serenity is on the contest winners list ..just keep scrolling down till u see the winners posted for the Seascapes contest by Raul.. I saw that its not coming up when u type Serenity in the poem box up top.. maybe Soup has to catch up with its postings all the information.. luv ..yahoo..mail..luv.. Linda-Marie
K. Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 1:29 AM
Your title alone invokes such wonder and reading your poem is a fitting tale of what happens to ardent prayers--this is really masterfully written , I can't help but sort of whisper in mind as I read this some sort of a hushed, awed feeling--beautiful write yet again, Andrea :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 4:41 PM
In Mac's second By Request contest I entered A Poet's Piece ..but it did not place at all... this poem has won many awards in other contests and is in many anthologies too.. but I guess Mac was looking for something different.. will tell u in my other mail ... Serenity was my Haiku entry for Raul's contest which placed 11th ... and so it goes on the contest circa... luv..
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February 14, 2010 at 10:06 PM
WOW! Andrea, that is truly a beautiful and inspiring write! Thanks for sharing. Bes wishes, Caroline.
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February 14, 2010 at 4:16 PM
very nice indeed, Andrea Let's keep praying and penning! -Robert
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February 14, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Wow...I love this poem...it's so powerful...enjoyed...Marty P.S. Soup mail
Clark Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:02 AM
Wow Andrea this is absolutely awesome. I am a prayer and you have captured my vision of prayer! So beautifully composed!!!! Thanks for all your support, I guess I did make the list ! Hurray! Love Jeralynn
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February 14, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Well, i think that you are an angel 'clothed in flesh' here that lives on Earth like you describe in your poem, Andrea.i think you have always been one. not everyone is. beautiful write. <: -Always Lynn
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February 14, 2010 at 8:25 AM
Incredible image of our prayers ascending to heaven, some admitted at the celestial door and others drifting back to earth to be fulfilled by the supporters who seek to "fulfill the Father's will." Very inspiring words for a Sunday morning! Love, Carolyn
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February 14, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Great write. I totally agree that it happens that way. You put it so well. Hooray for Earth Angels!
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February 14, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Than you for your welcome blog comments Andrea.Rgds Brian
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