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The Fate of Ardent Prayers

To eyes that see spiritually, prayers at their most ardent appear like random meteors or lightening flashes, ascending suddenly amidst the myriad of points of light, creations' more common invocations. Burgeoning in sky as glitter dreams or solemn supplications, and some as fervent pleas from dangers' depths, they rise and soar. . . to the glorious celestial door. Seraphs at the portals, besieged by beautiful entreaties, strive to answer each and every one, but heaven's ways can be mysterious. . . Ardent prayers unanswered drift back down, returned not to their supplicants, but rather to earth's angels clothed in flesh, who prompted by the Spirit, and at the time ordained, help fulfill the Father's will.

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Date: 5/3/2020 7:33:00 PM
I like the phrase, "creations' more common invocations." Really nice imagery with stars, lightning, and angels as messengers of prayers. Great spiritual vocabulary and message!
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:54:00 AM
Very much depth in this poem--kashinath
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Joe Flach's contest "A Poem That Doesn't Rhyme". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2010 3:33:00 PM
Warm congrats Andrea on your win. Beautiful poem, well deserved. love, shar xoxo
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:58:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Joe’s contest. your write was great! May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:24:00 AM
Awesome write, Andrea! My congratulations to you! I guess we all see things differently, but this is beautiful and inspirational. Love, Audrey
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:50:00 AM
Lovely and meaningful words. What a beautiful idea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:37:00 AM
Congrats on your HM in Joe's contest Andrea... the other winners are posted if u want to look.. enjoy your big honor my friend.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:09:00 PM
Congrats on this selection. I missed this one. You believe, evidently, as I do - there are angels here on Earth, maybe a little more than flesh and blood. Love, Dave
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:36:00 PM
How did I miss this one? Congratulations on all three of your marvelous entries. I think my favourite is 'Strangler's Wood' Sincere good luck...Luv Margaret
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Date: 6/1/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congrats for making it into the first round with this powerful poem...Wish you a great week! Gert
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Date: 4/4/2010 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poem being futured this week, Andrea! Yes, prayers are essential in our life to make our trust and faith ef in God grow. Have a Blessed and Happy Easter. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 3/22/2010 12:09:00 PM
A very intresting poem. I do like the inspiration worded in your poem--answer each and every one..I like that line the most .I like to think God works things to his plan. If we do no't get answers the way we pray..Enjoyed
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:48:00 AM
Serenity is on the contest winners list ..just keep scrolling down till u see the winners posted for the Seascapes contest by Raul.. I saw that its not coming up when u type Serenity in the poem box up top.. maybe Soup has to catch up with its postings all the information.. luv ..yahoo..mail..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/16/2010 1:29:00 AM
Your title alone invokes such wonder and reading your poem is a fitting tale of what happens to ardent prayers--this is really masterfully written , I can't help but sort of whisper in mind as I read this some sort of a hushed, awed feeling--beautiful write yet again, Andrea :)
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Date: 2/15/2010 4:41:00 PM
In Mac's second By Request contest I entered A Poet's Piece ..but it did not place at all... this poem has won many awards in other contests and is in many anthologies too.. but I guess Mac was looking for something different.. will tell u in my other mail ... Serenity was my Haiku entry for Raul's contest which placed 11th ... and so it goes on the contest circa... luv..
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Date: 2/14/2010 10:06:00 PM
WOW! Andrea, that is truly a beautiful and inspiring write! Thanks for sharing. Bes wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:16:00 PM
very nice indeed, Andrea Let's keep praying and penning! -Robert
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Date: 2/14/2010 1:29:00 PM
Wow...I love this poem...it's so powerful...enjoyed...Marty P.S. Soup mail
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:02:00 AM
Wow Andrea this is absolutely awesome. I am a prayer and you have captured my vision of prayer! So beautifully composed!!!! Thanks for all your support, I guess I did make the list ! Hurray! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 2/14/2010 10:32:00 AM
Well, i think that you are an angel 'clothed in flesh' here that lives on Earth like you describe in your poem, Andrea.i think you have always been one. not everyone is. beautiful write. <: -Always Lynn
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:25:00 AM
Incredible image of our prayers ascending to heaven, some admitted at the celestial door and others drifting back to earth to be fulfilled by the supporters who seek to "fulfill the Father's will." Very inspiring words for a Sunday morning! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:56:00 AM
Great write. I totally agree that it happens that way. You put it so well. Hooray for Earth Angels!
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:33:00 AM
Than you for your welcome blog comments Andrea.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:11:00 AM
OMG Andrea these beautiful and inspiring words.. an instant favorite today .. on this special day of LUV... absolutely amazing write... u have stirred my soul with this "beauty"..luv.. Linda-Marie.. SOUP MAIL..TWO
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