The Farewell of a Magnolia Tree

Goodbye record blackened storm,
And as I lie drying from green to crisp
Waiting for the inevitable debris city truck,
I shall drain my memories,
You were only two and I was 5 feet tall
When you hovered in your sandbox
Making mud pies,
And I shaded you when you read your first words
On a palette under summer skies.
Dropping big white blossoms as I grew
And spread my arms bearing wax of green,
And now I lie on your parkway telling
Your aging appreciation goodbye,
And are you crying?
So am I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Trifiatis Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Very moving poem! I understand you very well my dearest for I have been through the same experience! Is like a relative or a friend dying! Beautifully written dearest, Sunlite!
Adams Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 7:11 PM
A beautiful yet poignant poem... it’s a very touching write! :) hugs
Kiser Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 5:19 PM
There is a magnolia tree next door to me; I love sitting on the patio when there's a breeze coming in my direction; it's magnificent! Great pen.
Warrior Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Superbly done my friend...personification personified...sending love...^WW^ :o)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 2:07 PM
The sensitive way you wrote this touching poem brought tears to my eyes. It is going into my faves! I love it! : ) xxoo
Michael Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 1:55 PM
I enjoyed it...Very creative...
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