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The Farewell of a Magnolia Tree

Goodbye record blackened storm, And as I lie drying from green to crisp Waiting for the inevitable debris city truck, I shall drain my memories, You were only two and I was 5 feet tall When you hovered in your sandbox Making mud pies, And I shaded you when you read your first words On a palette under summer skies. Dropping big white blossoms as I grew And spread my arms bearing wax of green, And now I lie on your parkway telling Your aging appreciation goodbye, And are you crying? So am I

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/12/2019 10:47:00 AM
Very moving poem! I understand you very well my dearest for I have been through the same experience! Is like a relative or a friend dying! Beautifully written dearest, Sunlite!
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Date: 7/11/2019 7:11:00 PM
A beautiful yet poignant poem... it’s a very touching write! :) hugs
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Date: 7/9/2019 5:19:00 PM
There is a magnolia tree next door to me; I love sitting on the patio when there's a breeze coming in my direction; it's magnificent! Great pen.
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Date: 7/8/2019 9:58:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...personification personified...sending love...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/7/2019 2:07:00 PM
The sensitive way you wrote this touching poem brought tears to my eyes. It is going into my faves! I love it! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/6/2019 1:55:00 PM
I enjoyed it...Very creative...
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