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The Falling of Fall

september stumbles
with falling colors crimson
tripped by autumns breeze





Setp.07.2019
A Transition of Seasons Haiku
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 9/23/2019 6:21:00 PM

Nice one. I love the double meaning of the word "fall."

Paul Callus

Date: 9/13/2019 4:36:00 PM

I like the image and play on words, WW. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2019 8:32:00 PM

Congratulations for your win WW! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2019 10:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your Silver medal WW! This is gorgeous! xxoo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 9/11/2019 9:55:00 AM

Wonderful write Wing'ed One. Congratulations on your win! xomo

David Drowley

Date: 9/11/2019 8:34:00 AM

'Winged Warrior, Beautiful imagery. Excellent choice of words. Congratulations on your win! David'

Eve Roper

Date: 9/10/2019 8:05:00 PM

I love the stumbling , ^WW^, very appropriate as it leaves the stage with autumn being the center of attention.. congratulations on your win. Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/10/2019 7:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win, WW. Beautiful imagery.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2019 6:48:00 PM

I just loved this one ^WW^, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/10/2019 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations WW on your podium win with your beautifully written haiku!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/9/2019 5:45:00 PM

Especially the final line! Very nice, WW!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2019 2:09:00 PM

Don't you just love the way leaves look when they're falling? Like the clever way you have September stumbling while autumn winds trip her. A lovely entry for the contest. Wishing you success, Winged Warrior! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 9/9/2019 1:53:00 PM

gorgeous imagery I too have written about Autumn:-) hugs Jan xx

Hello There

Date: 9/9/2019 12:54:00 PM

Love this ~

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/9/2019 12:14:00 PM

Oh bro bro this was gorgeous and a sure win!;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2019 11:27:00 AM

I enjoyed the personalization in this wonderful haiku WW. Autumn is my favorite season and I delight in reading autumn poems this time of year. Best wishes for a win! : ) xxoo