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september stumbles with falling colors crimson tripped by autumns breeze Setp.07.2019 A Transition of Seasons Haiku Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Date: 9/23/2019 6:21:00 PM
Nice one. I love the double meaning of the word "fall."
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Date: 9/13/2019 4:36:00 PM
I like the image and play on words, WW. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/12/2019 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations for your win WW! :)
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Date: 9/11/2019 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your Silver medal WW! This is gorgeous! xxoo
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Date: 9/11/2019 9:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Wing'ed One. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:34:00 AM
'Winged Warrior, Beautiful imagery. Excellent choice of words. Congratulations on your win! David'
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Date: 9/10/2019 8:05:00 PM
I love the stumbling , ^WW^, very appropriate as it leaves the stage with autumn being the center of attention.. congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, WW. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:48:00 PM
I just loved this one ^WW^, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:24:00 PM
Congratulations WW on your podium win with your beautifully written haiku!
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Date: 9/9/2019 5:45:00 PM
Especially the final line! Very nice, WW!
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Date: 9/9/2019 2:09:00 PM
Don't you just love the way leaves look when they're falling? Like the clever way you have September stumbling while autumn winds trip her. A lovely entry for the contest. Wishing you success, Winged Warrior! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2019 1:53:00 PM
gorgeous imagery I too have written about Autumn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/9/2019 12:54:00 PM
Love this ~
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Date: 9/9/2019 12:14:00 PM
Oh bro bro this was gorgeous and a sure win!;)
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Date: 9/9/2019 11:27:00 AM
I enjoyed the personalization in this wonderful haiku WW. Autumn is my favorite season and I delight in reading autumn poems this time of year. Best wishes for a win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/8/2019 11:31:00 AM
Great imagery...
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Date: 9/8/2019 9:24:00 AM
Nice imagery... I like the stumbling Fall...
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Date: 9/7/2019 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful WW! :)
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