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"the Fab Five"

Four fingers and my thumb rest on your thigh, Positioned around the bend of your knee, Moving just as far as the eye can see, Because your skirt hides the ultimate high. Four fingers and my thumb creep like a spy, Making circles as you react with glee, Moving under the fabric meant to be The boundary that I should not pass by. Up your thigh with my thumb and four fingers, Causing your inhibitions to go numb, I firmly position my five clingers, As they marvel at how far they have come. Your breath leaves as the sensation lingers, While four fingers wait outside for my thumb.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 6:52:00 AM
If i had 5 thumbs i raise them all 4 you. You really creamed out this round with your fab. 5..you are awesome Doc. You are one bad boy in sonnet. I would never challenge you, to anything but a clean slam.. Good job Doc. have a cool one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:27:00 AM
wowowow what can i say to that one ..now i am thinking well done !!!! sarah x
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Date: 6/22/2010 6:46:00 PM
Very passionate Italian sonnet with perfect rhyme abba abba dc cd cd. Good luck in the contest
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