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The Eyes of Venus

Hot raptor breath Push goosebumps to life On the golden-honey flesh Of a most desired sight. Deeply tanned and rubenesque, Unsheathed, scented shoulders. Arms that distill without cause to beckon The wills of the penile-brained knights. Wallow in her moist pink flower. Defend with your armor that nymphet tower. But beware, Dear Sir, should your eye slip up Two orbs of Venus power.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 4/29/2016 4:42:00 AM
Very sensual indeed, Tom. Elaine
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Date: 4/24/2016 12:13:00 PM
At first I thought the orbs were referring to large breasts. Then realized I better refer to the title! Or was I right the first time? Made a funny picture for me that way!! You are a new delight here at soup, Tom!!
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Date: 4/24/2016 7:33:00 PM
You decide (ha, ha)....
Date: 4/21/2016 10:56:00 AM
a delightful and tasty poem... WOW, the flow has a passion I enjoyed. The warning is well set out at the end. Them eyes, them eyes are powerful.... LINDA
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