The Eyes of Venus

Hot raptor breath
Push goosebumps to life
On the golden-honey flesh
Of a most desired sight.

Deeply tanned and rubenesque,
Unsheathed, scented shoulders.
Arms that distill without cause to beckon
The wills of the penile-brained knights.

Wallow in her moist pink flower.
Defend with your armor that nymphet tower.
But beware, Dear Sir, should your eye slip up
Two orbs of Venus power.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:42 AM
Very sensual indeed, Tom. Elaine
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 12:13 PM
At first I thought the orbs were referring to large breasts. Then realized I better refer to the title! Or was I right the first time? Made a funny picture for me that way!! You are a new delight here at soup, Tom!!
Arnone Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 7:33 PM
You decide (ha, ha)....
A   Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 10:56 AM
a delightful and tasty poem... WOW, the flow has a passion I enjoyed. The warning is well set out at the end. Them eyes, them eyes are powerful.... LINDA
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