The Eyes of a Rich Man

Walking down the street
The eyes of a man watching me
Something about him I have never liked
Possibly the last person I want to see

Many times exchanging insults
Without a single word being said
His smug face and the latest fashion
For this society he was bred

Could he really be thinking
That he can buy exemption
With the flash of his polished look
And no thoughts of his soul’s redemption?

A world designed to enlighten
And to teach us the meaning of justice
His eyes fixed directly upon me
No doubt he loves his status

But is that a crack of doubt
I see in the green of his eyes?
Perhaps I have rushed to judgment
And possibly he is my ally?

Both strangers stop to look
Do we have the courage to question?
In my heart I feel the faintest hope
As I turn from the shop window’s reflection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Delacroix Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Quite interesting a write as well, David! In French, we have the saying, the habit doesn't make the monk. Probably it is the same in English, but I feel that this is what the write is saying. We, often, judge another from our own concepts, but when we look a little further, we find we all have some to share, something valid. Caroline.
I agree...the ending is great...we all wear our masks to hide what lies deep within...nicely done...
Konos Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:39 AM
All the while, it sounded as though the person in your poetry had a complex as wide as the world....until the last verse...Very thought provoking. Thank You
Williams Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:17 AM
thank you for your kind words. i just love this , great ending. David.
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