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The Eyes of a Rich Man

Walking down the street The eyes of a man watching me Something about him I have never liked Possibly the last person I want to see Many times exchanging insults Without a single word being said His smug face and the latest fashion For this society he was bred Could he really be thinking That he can buy exemption With the flash of his polished look And no thoughts of his soul’s redemption? A world designed to enlighten And to teach us the meaning of justice His eyes fixed directly upon me No doubt he loves his status But is that a crack of doubt I see in the green of his eyes? Perhaps I have rushed to judgment And possibly he is my ally? Both strangers stop to look Do we have the courage to question? In my heart I feel the faintest hope As I turn from the shop window’s reflection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 9:56:00 PM
Quite interesting a write as well, David! In French, we have the saying, the habit doesn't make the monk. Probably it is the same in English, but I feel that this is what the write is saying. We, often, judge another from our own concepts, but when we look a little further, we find we all have some to share, something valid. Caroline.
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:04:00 AM
I agree...the ending is great...we all wear our masks to hide what lies deep within...nicely done...
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:39:00 AM
All the while, it sounded as though the person in your poetry had a complex as wide as the world....until the last verse...Very thought provoking. Thank You
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:17:00 AM
thank you for your kind words. i just love this , great ending. David.
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