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The Eyes Have It

As have I Has the dawn ever seen your eyes, glowing in dreamscape whispers, feathered by soft morning breezes, enticing daylight wishes & hot coffee desires, reflecting in a summer’s sunrise while bed sheet & flannel affections warm you… as have I 7/7/17 Written for “The Eyes Have It” poetry contest Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

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Date: 7/13/2017 12:39:00 AM
Lovely poem, Chris, congratulations:)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/13/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jo.
Date: 7/12/2017 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations Chris. I knew that flannel line would do it lol :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/13/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. :)
Date: 7/12/2017 5:22:00 PM
Chris, very intense in a few words, congratulations on your win..... ~*
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much Eve.
Date: 7/12/2017 4:43:00 PM
Ah Chris...I love the imagery in this romantic poem! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Connie, so very much. Your comments always bring a smile to me.
Date: 7/12/2017 12:54:00 PM
Mate, congrats to you, Chris, on you win
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend but I think I owe you some congrats as well. Looks like we were neck and neck in this one. : )
Date: 7/12/2017 12:08:00 PM
Congrats Chris I knew this would do well!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 7/12/2017 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations Chris, always the romantic, well done
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Frederic but I think the congrats should go in the other direction. See, I told you yours was a winner. Nice win my friend.
Date: 7/12/2017 10:43:00 AM
Congrats!!! Chris...very cool entry my friend...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, I am glad you liked it.
Date: 7/12/2017 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on your placement in my contest. So much said in so few words. Thank you for your participation and your wonderful entry:)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 10:17:00 AM
Hey thanks Daniel. I am thrilled you liked it. It was an honor to enter your contest.
Date: 7/10/2017 10:28:00 PM
Warm and wonderful poem, Chris <3
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara. I am happy you liked this little poem.
Date: 7/10/2017 12:10:00 PM
Love this little poem Chris. Hot coffee and sunrise in eyes, what else would you want. Good luck in the contest my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 7/10/2017 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Chris. Sensual lines like ... enticing daylight wishes & hot coffee desires ... while bed sheet & flannel affections warm you ... as have I. Pure poetry on display by a master poet. Love and peace always.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 12:02:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 7/10/2017 8:53:00 AM
Warm, cosy, cuddly and sensual - a great way to wake up in the morning Chris. all the best with the contest. Nicely written...Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 12:02:00 PM
Thanks so very much Maria. Your kind words are always welcome here.
Date: 7/10/2017 8:18:00 AM
I don't think so..great poem Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Tim. I don't think so either. :)
Date: 7/10/2017 8:17:00 AM
Really great poem Chris, always so warm and tender your writing, Daniel should love this one!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so very much John. I hope so.
Date: 7/10/2017 8:14:00 AM
Awesome pen my friend. Best to you! xomo :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so very much Maureen
Date: 7/10/2017 7:21:00 AM
Superb writing, my friend! Lovely sounds, as read aloud. A winner!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Date: 7/10/2017 6:28:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem that certainly warms the reader with comfort Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi for your wonderful comments always on my poetry

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