Chris Green Poet Free verse

The Eyes Have It

As have I  

Has the dawn ever seen your eyes,
glowing in dreamscape whispers,
feathered by soft morning breezes,
enticing daylight wishes
& hot coffee desires,
reflecting in a summer’s sunrise
while bed sheet & flannel
affections warm you…
as have I 


7/7/17
Written for “The Eyes Have It” poetry contest
Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

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Joanna Daniel July 13, 2017 at 12:39 AM Lovely poem, Chris, congratulations:) Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 9:03 AM Thanks so very much Jo.

Heidi Sands July 12, 2017 at 8:36 PM Congratulations Chris. I knew that flannel line would do it lol :) Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 9:03 AM Thank you Heidi. :)

Eve Roper July 12, 2017 at 5:22 PM Chris, very intense in a few words, congratulations on your win..... ~* Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 5:28 PM Thank you so very much Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong July 12, 2017 at 4:43 PM Ah Chris...I love the imagery in this romantic poem! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 4:55 PM Thank you Connie, so very much. Your comments always bring a smile to me.

White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 12:54 PM Mate, congrats to you, Chris, on you win Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 4:55 PM Thanks so much my friend but I think I owe you some congrats as well. Looks like we were neck and neck in this one. : )

John Hamilton July 12, 2017 at 12:08 PM Congrats Chris I knew this would do well! Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 1:09 PM Thanks so much my friend.

Frederic Parker July 12, 2017 at 11:55 AM Congratulations Chris, always the romantic, well done Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 1:08 PM Thanks so much Frederic but I think the congrats should go in the other direction. See, I told you yours was a winner. Nice win my friend.

Winged Warrior July 12, 2017 at 10:43 AM Congrats!!! Chris...very cool entry my friend...^WW^ Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 11:04 AM Thanks so much, I am glad you liked it.

Daniel Turner July 12, 2017 at 10:13 AM Congratulations Chris on your placement in my contest. So much said in so few words. Thank you for your participation and your wonderful entry:) Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 10:17 AM Hey thanks Daniel. I am thrilled you liked it. It was an honor to enter your contest.

Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 10:28 PM Warm and wonderful poem, Chris <3 Chris Green July 11, 2017 at 8:15 AM Thank you so much Sara. I am happy you liked this little poem.

Darren White July 10, 2017 at 12:10 PM Love this little poem Chris. Hot coffee and sunrise in eyes, what else would you want. Good luck in the contest my friend :) Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 12:33 PM Thanks so very much my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 10, 2017 at 10:51 AM Beautiful poem, Chris. Sensual lines like ... enticing daylight wishes & hot coffee desires ... while bed sheet & flannel affections warm you ... as have I. Pure poetry on display by a master poet. Love and peace always. Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 12:02 PM Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

Maria Williams July 10, 2017 at 8:53 AM Warm, cosy, cuddly and sensual - a great way to wake up in the morning Chris. all the best with the contest. Nicely written...Maria Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 12:02 PM Thanks so very much Maria. Your kind words are always welcome here.

Tim Smith July 10, 2017 at 8:18 AM I don't think so..great poem Chris Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 11:57 AM Thanks Tim. I don't think so either. :)

John Hamilton July 10, 2017 at 8:17 AM Really great poem Chris, always so warm and tender your writing, Daniel should love this one! Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 11:57 AM Thanks so very much John. I hope so.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 10, 2017 at 8:14 AM Awesome pen my friend. Best to you! xomo :) Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 11:57 AM Thanks so very much Maureen

Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2017 at 7:21 AM Superb writing, my friend! Lovely sounds, as read aloud. A winner! Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 11:57 AM Thanks so very much Kim.

Heidi Sands July 10, 2017 at 6:28 AM This is a beautiful poem that certainly warms the reader with comfort Chris :) Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 11:56 AM Thank you so very much Heidi for your wonderful comments always on my poetry