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The Eyes Have It

As she probes my soul with her fiery eyes
Is there no way to escape their allure?
For no common sense or logic applies
Love is the disease, then what is the cure?

Her eyes, piercing, leaving me euphoric
Never have I been touched like this before
Feed me not the cure, I remain, love sick
In fact, my heart doth cry out, "give me more"

At first contact, your eyes did speak to me
For they are true lights in heaven above
They speak a language so openly free
But most importantly they speak of love

Whenever I need the touch of your stare
I know in my heart you'll always be there

10~July~2017

For the eyes have it contest
Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

Copyright © White Wolf | Year Posted 2017

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Patricia Cresswell Date: 8/25/2017 11:10:00 AM Eyes are truly the window of the soul and what ever spirit exists with us here. Much can be read in a look. A very thought provoking write. It takes my mind to a broader field not just love but truth, fidelity and so much more. This is an insightful love poem but so much more. Thank you. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/13/2017 12:38:00 AM What a lovely sonnet, WW!! Congratulations:) Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/12/2017 8:42:00 PM Congratulations White Wolf :) Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 7/12/2017 7:45:00 PM Very well written sonnet. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 7/12/2017 5:21:00 PM WW, great poem full of romantic imagery, congratulations on your win..... ~* Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/12/2017 4:21:00 PM Wolf, I love everything about your poem! Congratulations on a stunning entry and winning placement! : ) Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 7/12/2017 12:07:00 PM This is top shelf writing WW, first few lines drew me in, last couplet was perfect final touch, congrats on a fine placement! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 7/12/2017 11:54:00 AM Congratulations on your win, the first two lines set the scene for this wonderful sonnet Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/12/2017 12:44:00 PM Thank you, Fred /|\

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/12/2017 11:17:00 AM White Wolf, CONGRATS on your win! Janice Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/12/2017 12:44:00 PM Thank you, Janice /|\

Winged Warrior Date: 7/12/2017 10:41:00 AM Congrats!!! Wolfie...beautiful sonnet my friend...^WW^ Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/12/2017 11:13:00 AM Thank you, my friend! /|\

Daniel Turner Date: 7/12/2017 10:11:00 AM Congratulations Budgie on your placement in my contest. I loved the final couplet." The touch of a stare" says it all. Thank you for your participation. Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/12/2017 10:24:00 AM Thank you for taking the time out to congrat me, Daniel! It was fun /|\

Chris Green Date: 7/10/2017 6:48:00 AM Gorgeous my friend, this looks like a winner to me. Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/12/2017 10:23:00 AM Thank you, Chris /|\

Sara Ella Date: 7/9/2017 10:04:00 PM This is lovely Rick <3 Good luck on the contest! :) Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/10/2017 1:43:00 AM Thank you, Sara /|\

Dean Wood Date: 7/9/2017 8:20:00 PM Sounds like you've got it bad Wolf. This is great! - Dean Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/9/2017 9:36:00 PM Thank you very much, Dean /|\

Street Cries Date: 7/9/2017 7:39:00 PM Master ink Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/9/2017 9:24:00 PM Thank you very much /|\

Heidi Sands Date: 7/9/2017 7:28:00 PM Tim said exactly what I was thinking Awesome!! I love it :) Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/9/2017 9:23:00 PM Thank you, Heidi /|\

Tim Smith Date: 7/9/2017 7:16:00 PM Awesome Budgie...I'll be lucky to hit the board in this contest. Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/9/2017 9:19:00 PM Thanks a lot, Tim /|\

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/9/2017 7:14:00 PM You did quite well with this theme, Budgie. It's a lovely poem. I am back home now and wishing i had more time to catch up with everyone here. Thanks for reading my latest poetry, my friend!! Login to Reply White Wolf Date: 7/9/2017 9:18:00 PM Geez, that flew by! Haha, thank you, Andrea, and welcome back /|\