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As she probes my soul with her fiery eyes Is there no way to escape their allure? For no common sense or logic applies Love is the disease, then what is the cure? Her eyes, piercing, leaving me euphoric Never have I been touched like this before Feed me not the cure, I remain, love sick In fact, my heart doth cry out, "give me more" At first contact, your eyes did speak to me For they are true lights in heaven above They speak a language so openly free But most importantly they speak of love Whenever I need the touch of your stare I know in my heart you'll always be there 10~July~2017 For the eyes have it contest Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/25/2017 11:10:00 AM

Eyes are truly the window of the soul and what ever spirit exists with us here. Much can be read in a look. A very thought provoking write. It takes my mind to a broader field not just love but truth, fidelity and so much more. This is an insightful love poem but so much more. Thank you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/13/2017 12:38:00 AM

What a lovely sonnet, WW!! Congratulations:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/12/2017 8:42:00 PM

Congratulations White Wolf :)

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/12/2017 7:45:00 PM

Very well written sonnet. Congratulations.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2017 5:21:00 PM

WW, great poem full of romantic imagery, congratulations on your win..... ~*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2017 4:21:00 PM

Wolf, I love everything about your poem! Congratulations on a stunning entry and winning placement! : )

John Hamilton

Date: 7/12/2017 12:07:00 PM

This is top shelf writing WW, first few lines drew me in, last couplet was perfect final touch, congrats on a fine placement!

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/12/2017 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, the first two lines set the scene for this wonderful sonnet

White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 12:44:00 PM

Thank you, Fred /|\

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/12/2017 11:17:00 AM

White Wolf, CONGRATS on your win! Janice

White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 12:44:00 PM

Thank you, Janice /|\

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/12/2017 10:41:00 AM

Congrats!!! Wolfie...beautiful sonnet my friend...^WW^

White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! /|\

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/12/2017 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations Budgie on your placement in my contest. I loved the final couplet." The touch of a stare" says it all. Thank you for your participation.

White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time out to congrat me, Daniel! It was fun /|\

Chris Green

Date: 7/10/2017 6:48:00 AM

Gorgeous my friend, this looks like a winner to me.

White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 10:23:00 AM

Thank you, Chris /|\

Sara Ella

Date: 7/9/2017 10:04:00 PM

This is lovely Rick <3 Good luck on the contest! :)

White Wolf
Date: 7/10/2017 1:43:00 AM

Thank you, Sara /|\

Dean Wood

Date: 7/9/2017 8:20:00 PM

Sounds like you've got it bad Wolf. This is great! - Dean

White Wolf
Date: 7/9/2017 9:36:00 PM

Thank you very much, Dean /|\

Street Cries

Date: 7/9/2017 7:39:00 PM

Master ink

White Wolf
Date: 7/9/2017 9:24:00 PM

Thank you very much /|\

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/9/2017 7:28:00 PM

Tim said exactly what I was thinking Awesome!! I love it :)

White Wolf
Date: 7/9/2017 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi /|\

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2017 7:16:00 PM

Awesome Budgie...I'll be lucky to hit the board in this contest.

White Wolf
Date: 7/9/2017 9:19:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Tim /|\

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2017 7:14:00 PM

You did quite well with this theme, Budgie. It's a lovely poem. I am back home now and wishing i had more time to catch up with everyone here. Thanks for reading my latest poetry, my friend!!

White Wolf
Date: 7/9/2017 9:18:00 PM

Geez, that flew by! Haha, thank you, Andrea, and welcome back /|\