White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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The Eyes Have It

As she probes my soul with her fiery eyes
Is there no way to escape their allure?
For no common sense or logic applies
Love is the disease, then what is the cure?

Her eyes, piercing, leaving me euphoric
Never have I been touched like this before
Feed me not the cure, I remain, love sick
In fact, my heart doth cry out, "give me more"

At first contact, your eyes did speak to me
For they are true lights in heaven above
They speak a language so openly free
But most importantly they speak of love

Whenever I need the touch of your stare
I know in my heart you'll always be there

10~July~2017

For the eyes have it contest
Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

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Patricia Cresswell August 25, 2017 at 11:10 AM Eyes are truly the window of the soul and what ever spirit exists with us here. Much can be read in a look. A very thought provoking write. It takes my mind to a broader field not just love but truth, fidelity and so much more. This is an insightful love poem but so much more. Thank you.

Joanna Daniel July 13, 2017 at 12:38 AM What a lovely sonnet, WW!! Congratulations:)

Heidi Sands July 12, 2017 at 8:42 PM Congratulations White Wolf :)

Janis Medders Tobechi July 12, 2017 at 7:45 PM Very well written sonnet. Congratulations.

Eve Roper July 12, 2017 at 5:21 PM WW, great poem full of romantic imagery, congratulations on your win..... ~*

Connie Marcum Wong July 12, 2017 at 4:21 PM Wolf, I love everything about your poem! Congratulations on a stunning entry and winning placement! : )

John Hamilton July 12, 2017 at 12:07 PM This is top shelf writing WW, first few lines drew me in, last couplet was perfect final touch, congrats on a fine placement!

Frederic Parker July 12, 2017 at 11:54 AM Congratulations on your win, the first two lines set the scene for this wonderful sonnet White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 12:44 PM Thank you, Fred /|\

Janice Canerdy July 12, 2017 at 11:17 AM White Wolf, CONGRATS on your win! Janice White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 12:44 PM Thank you, Janice /|\

Winged Warrior July 12, 2017 at 10:41 AM Congrats!!! Wolfie...beautiful sonnet my friend...^WW^ White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thank you, my friend! /|\

Daniel Turner July 12, 2017 at 10:11 AM Congratulations Budgie on your placement in my contest. I loved the final couplet." The touch of a stare" says it all. Thank you for your participation. White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 10:24 AM Thank you for taking the time out to congrat me, Daniel! It was fun /|\

Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 6:48 AM Gorgeous my friend, this looks like a winner to me. White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 10:23 AM Thank you, Chris /|\

Sara Ella July 9, 2017 at 10:04 PM This is lovely Rick <3 Good luck on the contest! :) White Wolf July 10, 2017 at 1:43 AM Thank you, Sara /|\

Dean Wood July 9, 2017 at 8:20 PM Sounds like you've got it bad Wolf. This is great! - Dean White Wolf July 9, 2017 at 9:36 PM Thank you very much, Dean /|\

Street Cries July 9, 2017 at 7:39 PM Master ink White Wolf July 9, 2017 at 9:24 PM Thank you very much /|\

Heidi Sands July 9, 2017 at 7:28 PM Tim said exactly what I was thinking Awesome!! I love it :) White Wolf July 9, 2017 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Heidi /|\

Tim Smith July 9, 2017 at 7:16 PM Awesome Budgie...I'll be lucky to hit the board in this contest. White Wolf July 9, 2017 at 9:19 PM Thanks a lot, Tim /|\

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2017 at 7:14 PM You did quite well with this theme, Budgie. It's a lovely poem. I am back home now and wishing i had more time to catch up with everyone here. Thanks for reading my latest poetry, my friend!! White Wolf July 9, 2017 at 9:18 PM Geez, that flew by! Haha, thank you, Andrea, and welcome back /|\