The Eyes Have It-Dukes Dilemma

If I were you, I wouldn’t walk there
                         Not there, behind the couch
Oh brother, it’s too late isn’t it?
Is your sock wet? I really had to go!
And the door was locked
         and you were taking a nap and well…
Don’t be mad,
Look into my eyes - you KNOW I’m sorry
Yes, that’s right,
            look deeply into my big brown eyes

And while I have your attention,
                              Please, please, oh please
Don’t look at the socks you wore yesterday

I was so nervous while you were out
            Yes, that’s it, really, really nervous!
And they were here and you weren’t and…

Keep looking – look into my eyes
                              My very sad brown eyes

And one more thing,
                      besides I love, love, love you

You didn’t really mean it about withholding
                                         my treats, did you?
You know, because of the lawn,
           I had to save a bone for winter, right!      

Great! Now that we’ve cleared that up,
I’m gonna let you go, my eyes are tired and
I need a nap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/26/2018 9:32:00 AM
One look and I know you will instantly forgive him and give a treat. So well penned, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/26/2018 9:41:00 AM
You are so right Warren !!! Thank you and Happy Wednesday!!
Date: 9/3/2018 5:41:00 PM
Absolutely terrific. An instant fav for me. Just love it! Well-done! ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2018 6:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon, I am so happy that you like it !!!
Date: 9/2/2018 6:07:00 PM
So sweet and made me laugh at the reality of how a dog or cat might think. They really do hate being scolded. : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie, you are always so kind and generous with your comments xxoo
Date: 9/1/2018 2:28:00 PM
You had me believing that cute pup was right in front of me and I'd definitely have forgiven those big brown eyes!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2018 3:16:00 PM
Wendy, I am so happy that you liked it, thank you so much xxoo
Date: 8/29/2018 3:21:00 PM
Cute conversation! How adorable they are, no matter what they do sometimes to annoy you. You captured the bond well, Mike. Best for a win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/29/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Vijay !!
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