The Eye of the World

Real life soap series:
celebrities show
how to fill the day
with too much to spend
and nothing to do.

Hospital life:
handsome doctor
meets pretty nurse
halfway the op.

CSI:
every hair
tells a tale.

TV
and me:

mwah.

(written for Dramatic Diminished Hexaverse Contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 2:49 AM
Kool write, James
Gorelick Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 1:15 PM
So very clever..glad to find you on the soupl BG
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