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The Extraordinary Consequence of Being

So often, I contemplate The extraordinary consequence of being Beholding majesty of dawn In quilted colors, salmon blush and coral pink When laced with morning blue, I think How can I explain the world, its beauty unsurpassed And my ability to see What I can’t fully understand When tasting of the fruits at hand Of cherries red or grapes of violet vine To still the wine that teases thirsty lips Why and how, I can’t explain So then again I ponder, how it is that I remain To bear the fragrance of the night When sunset in its splendor kisses a magenta sky To yield forever souvenirs Listening through my eager ears to graceful melody Be it Whip-poor-will or Lark As they pierce the lonely dark I still can’t comprehend And yet my hands extend To sense the purity, the brush of velvet snow To compliment all that I am seeing To boast the consequence of being

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Date: 9/16/2023 2:22:00 AM
A deep poem. I particularly loved the reference to my favorite eatables, like cherries, grapes and wine.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/16/2023 4:44:00 AM
Thank you Victor, i do always appreciate that you take the time to comment! happy Saturday!
Date: 9/10/2023 7:35:00 PM
Richard L. has summed up my feelings perfectly, maestro! Bravo! And oncor! :) gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2023 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Gw!!!
Date: 9/5/2023 5:33:00 AM
This is a master class in writing. It is both profound and beautiful to behold. Hugs Rick.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/5/2023 6:28:00 AM
Rick, how kind of you to offer such a compliment, thank you so much!!!!
Date: 9/3/2023 2:06:00 AM
Is it just me or are you getting more philosophical by age? I can feel your mind thinking in this introspective poem.. lots of deep thoughts here...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:14:00 AM
I think you are right, oh Silent One! Age definitely has brought a greater appreciation for so much taken for granted by youth!! Happy Sunday!!!
Date: 9/2/2023 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful, Mike! 'Vintage Gentile!' Only the poets and the saints appreciate life for its endless beauty. (Ha, ha. I guess I know which one you are, St. Gentile!) :) gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:12:00 AM
Yes Sir, I think you must!!!LOL, Happy Sunday GW!!!
Date: 9/2/2023 1:31:00 PM
A powerful poem and gentle read. I, too, share some of your same contemplative thoughts, for I'm wowed with all that I am allowed to see. I'm grateful for the gift of life, and, although I can't always understand what I see, hear, etc., I can respect and honor it. Nicely done!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:11:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much for your visit and kind comments!!! Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 11:20:00 PM
This is a deeply contemplative poem on the puzzle of 'Being' ! You enjoy your existence and your senses are alert to every beautiful sound and sight of nature. Though you can't comprhend the purpose of being, your hands extend to sense the purity, the brush of velvet snow and to boast of the consequence of being'. Beautiful poem dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2023 3:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 8:55:00 PM
Pure Mike poetic beauty!! Just beautiful….Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2023 3:35:00 AM
Thank you Deb xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 1:17:00 PM
This is true poetry Mike. It has everything: nature, contemplation, existential curiosities and more. I'm with you on this one. For me a fave
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2023 4:55:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much !!!
Date: 9/1/2023 1:09:00 PM
This is so beautiful! I love it and love the line ...to sense the purity, the brush of velvet snow! Another Fave for me. Your writing is so good Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2023 4:55:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for that lovely compliment xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 12:07:00 PM
- It is an honor to be in these moments ... emotions ... through beautiful experiences ... maybe we do not understand everything ... but be grateful ... and take care of this gift ... wonderful descriptions in your poem, Mike :) - hugs
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