The Extraordinary Consequence of Being

So often, I contemplate
                  The extraordinary consequence of being  
Beholding majesty of dawn
    In quilted colors, salmon blush and coral pink

When laced with morning blue, I think
How can I explain the world, its beauty unsurpassed
And my ability to see
              What I can’t fully understand

When tasting of the fruits at hand
                    Of cherries red or grapes of violet vine
To still the wine that teases thirsty lips
                               Why and how, I can’t explain

So then again I ponder, how it is that I remain
                           To bear the fragrance of the night
When sunset in its splendor kisses a magenta sky
To yield forever souvenirs 

Listening through my eager ears to graceful melody
Be it Whip-poor-will or Lark
                As they pierce the lonely dark
I still can’t comprehend  

And yet my hands extend
          To sense the purity, the brush of velvet snow
To compliment all that I am seeing
        To boast the consequence of being
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Date: 2/20/2025 7:38:00 AM
Revisiting this fave of mine Mike. This is an all time top tenner for me. This feels like it was written by one of the great poets of old, and that's no exaggeration
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/20/2025 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Tom, that is so kind and so very nice of you to say. I am truly and undeservedly flattered by your lovely compliment!!!
Date: 9/16/2023 2:22:00 AM
A deep poem. I particularly loved the reference to my favorite eatables, like cherries, grapes and wine.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/16/2023 4:44:00 AM
Thank you Victor, i do always appreciate that you take the time to comment! happy Saturday!
Date: 9/10/2023 7:35:00 PM
Richard L. has summed up my feelings perfectly, maestro! Bravo! And oncor! :) gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2023 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Gw!!!
Date: 9/5/2023 5:33:00 AM
This is a master class in writing. It is both profound and beautiful to behold. Hugs Rick.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/5/2023 6:28:00 AM
Rick, how kind of you to offer such a compliment, thank you so much!!!!
Date: 9/3/2023 2:06:00 AM
Is it just me or are you getting more philosophical by age? I can feel your mind thinking in this introspective poem.. lots of deep thoughts here...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:14:00 AM
I think you are right, oh Silent One! Age definitely has brought a greater appreciation for so much taken for granted by youth!! Happy Sunday!!!
Date: 9/2/2023 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful, Mike! 'Vintage Gentile!' Only the poets and the saints appreciate life for its endless beauty. (Ha, ha. I guess I know which one you are, St. Gentile!) :) gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:12:00 AM
Yes Sir, I think you must!!!LOL, Happy Sunday GW!!!
Date: 9/1/2023 11:20:00 PM
This is a deeply contemplative poem on the puzzle of 'Being' ! You enjoy your existence and your senses are alert to every beautiful sound and sight of nature. Though you can't comprhend the purpose of being, your hands extend to sense the purity, the brush of velvet snow and to boast of the consequence of being'. Beautiful poem dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2023 3:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 8:55:00 PM
Pure Mike poetic beauty!! Just beautiful….Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2023 3:35:00 AM
Thank you Deb xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 1:17:00 PM
This is true poetry Mike. It has everything: nature, contemplation, existential curiosities and more. I'm with you on this one. For me a fave
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2023 4:55:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much !!!
Date: 9/1/2023 1:09:00 PM
This is so beautiful! I love it and love the line ...to sense the purity, the brush of velvet snow! Another Fave for me. Your writing is so good Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2023 4:55:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for that lovely compliment xxoo
Date: 9/1/2023 12:07:00 PM
- It is an honor to be in these moments ... emotions ... through beautiful experiences ... maybe we do not understand everything ... but be grateful ... and take care of this gift ... wonderful descriptions in your poem, Mike :) - hugs
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