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The execution

The women fell upon the bodies of the dead,
clearing blindfolds for one last look upon their face.
Shot, against a carmine wall, no matter how they pled.
So now they mourn them through a veil of blackened lace.

A mother presses lips upon a virgin son;
a bride, in bloodstained white, whispers; she is to be;
a sister screams, at smoking guns, what have you done?

A Captain brushes some cigar ash from his knee.
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Velasco Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Wow, this poem hits hard—so full of sorrow and those vivid images really bring the pain of loss to life. You can really feel the emotions pouring out.
Miller Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Rowena, you turned up with some kind comments just as I was feeling a little low, it helped
Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Very sad scene you paint with these poetic words, my friend. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Bill
Miller Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Bill for your kind words
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