The Exchanges

Raised up by earlier than early spring					
the daffodils thrust their honking horns				
at the promise of this newness, earned again 				
by slumbering through last year’s losses.			
Zach placed them in a deep red bowl	 				
(one Mama Sal fancied for its shade					
and reasonable price at the Goodwill Store)				
and watered their toes to keep them dancing.				
I will not have to climb poetic hills					
to hear these honking daffodils.					
I know preserving short-lived thrills					
breeds sadness when they soon fade;					
that’s one of life’s favorite drills.					
But predicted snow might have chilled				
them sooner if my grandson hadn’t cut				
them in the sunlight before the storm. 				
They will survive a day or two, I hope,				
buoyed up by the beauty of the bowl.	
I will greet them every time I pass,						
the yellow honkers in the deep red glass.				
Then I’ll tote them to the compost bin				
where they may blend to foster life again.				
How charmed I was that, when Zach					
brought the blooms, I could give my celiac				
boy gluten free cookies from the spring rite				
of the girl scouts outside the Safeway store,				
the rite Mama Sal helped run years before.				
May he savor them a day or maybe more,				
suffering not one jot, not an inkling of ills.				
Thanks, Zach, for the honking daffodils.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/26/2019 10:15:00 AM
Bill, what a wonderful write, a look at a yesterday. I loved that line .. watered their toes to keep them dancing ... and many other excellent lines. I used to bring my mother dandelions that she placed in a special jar, at least she told me it was special.
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