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The Evil Within Me

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Inside, rage sufficiently evolves and simmers It sprawls systematically, abrading my dinkum mind, The eager embers are zealously veeled by Satan Until his fierce rage and evil seep into my veins My mind and thinking are comatose A fierce ache for blood has me quite oblivious As yet, I'm on the verge of yielding to the blaze By the dazzling haze, a radiant voice screams Let promptly withdraw of umbrages Afterward, you shall hoist the flaming mantle My stern eyes are bared by the keen timbre When I've excused, shout whip, and escape Forgiveness arises the way to waiving the past
1st PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 21, 2022 A Brian Strand 1093 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/21/2022 9:02:00 PM
When anger or rage boils inside, definitely we must realize that the embers of rage are inflamed by Satan, but never yield to it . It might burn one into cinders! Powerful write Lasaad
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