Paula Goldsmith Poet Quatrain

The Evil Cake

Ann today the "Rain" is coming down hard,                      We will sit "Home" and help your "Mama" bake.                  We just finished the icing when your "Father" walked in.    She makes the best chocolate "Cake," 


The "Unfair Calories" from last night almost did us both in, You and "Me Today" must start a diet so we don't gain.      Let's go buy some "Green Apples,"                                   "The Fact" is we cannot ever eat a whole cake ever again.


Tomorrow we need to work "In the Garden,"                    We can pull some "Weeds."                                              We can burn off some calories from the evil cake we devoured                                                                     "I Know" we can plant some seeds.  


They say "See No Evil" but that sure was an evil yet delicious cake,                                                                 
"Another Day" eating apples.                                          Do you "Hear Me" no more evil chocolate cake ever for us,                                                                        
Today please just one pineapple.



Date Written:5/19/2021    

3 Place
                                                                                
Dedicated to Ann Foster.                                                  Written using titles from some of her poems.

Title Wave Contest Judged: 6/28/2021                                            Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Constance La France June 29, 2021 at 2:12 PM Paula, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this beautiful tribute to Ann, love and serenity _Constance Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2021 at 9:15 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your very kind words. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun yet evil chocolate cake write. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Juliet Ligon June 29, 2021 at 10:53 AM LOL, this was fun to read. I love how you gave that cake personality. Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2021 at 9:13 AM Thank You, for writing. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun chocolate cake write. A chocolate cake needs personality. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Sam Kauffman June 29, 2021 at 10:25 AM Congratulations Paula for you winning tribute to Ann Foster. Love the way you blended her titles into an ode to chocolate cake - delicious. All the best! Blessings dear friend. I am sure Ann will love this creative delight! Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2021 at 9:11 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your very kind words. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like this fun chocolate cake write. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Beata Agustin June 29, 2021 at 6:15 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, exposing Ann Foster's awesome poetry. (I had a collaborative poem with her.) God bless you. Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2021 at 8:21 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 2:21 AM Wonderful work as always has been. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2021 at 8:20 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun poem. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Eve Roper June 28, 2021 at 8:31 PM Paula, great use of the titles to have inspired you to form your verse, a great tribute to Ann. Congratulations on your win in Richard's Title Wave contest. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2021 at 8:19 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. It was a fun poem to write. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2021 at 1:53 PM Thanks for entering my contest and honoring a talented poet. Congrats on your win. Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2021 at 8:17 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. I enjoyed writing this fun poem. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Ann Foster May 20, 2021 at 12:59 PM LOL... yes... I see... me... :) hehe... Hugs.... Ann Paula Goldsmith May 20, 2021 at 1:55 PM Yes, it is about you. Hugs..............

Ann Foster May 20, 2021 at 12:59 PM I was also the first post on this... :) lovely work... hugs... Ann Paula Goldsmith May 20, 2021 at 1:54 PM Thanks for writing the first post. Glad you like this Evil Cake write. I thought you did not see your name/titles on the bottom. Have a blessed day writing away with hugs..............

Paul Callus May 20, 2021 at 9:53 AM This is good, Paula, but certainly it was no easy job. You showed a lot of imagination. Best regards // paul Paula Goldsmith May 20, 2021 at 11:26 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write about The Evil Cake. Not easy to write but it was fun. Have a blessed day................

Robert Pettit May 20, 2021 at 3:34 AM I'm sure Ann will like this poem. You put the pieces of the puzzle together quite well. Paula Goldsmith May 20, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day................

Ann Foster May 19, 2021 at 4:19 PM This was fun to read. You are a busy bee, indeed. Hugs... Ann Hey my books are in the Sedona Library now... hurray... neat stuff... hugs... Paula Goldsmith May 20, 2021 at 11:24 AM Thanks for your note. Did you see this is about You/Writes???? Have a blessed day with hugs................