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The Eternal Caravan

Who know what I seek within me, In this heap of ashes neither there is a flame nor any spark. That passion to live has cooled down, That fervor to strive and struggle, My fiery spirit has bowed prone under the mere weight of grief and woe. Weary of life's daily grind, I neither fight nor cherish any desires; Destined to endure this mortal life I wander across this scorched desert looking for an oasis in the ever shifting sands of time. Cast out of the eternal caravan I gaze longingly at the rising clouds of dust in its wake, overcome by an insatiable thirst. Oh, It will be a rude awakening from the cradle of humanity to repose in the womb of eternity! ~A Brian Strand's contest. ~09/28/18 ~"I Wander the Desert Alone" contest Sponsor Edward Ibeh

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Date: 10/19/2018 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Abdul--I often ponder what your last stanza hints at.
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:03:00 PM
Nicely done, Abdul - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/17/2018 5:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
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Date: 10/14/2018 7:48:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Abdul. Well done.
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