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Red barn in the country sunny parcel of farmland ploughed field and heavy machinery at rest Chickens free ranging jersey cows grazing the pasture and the dog runs as it pleases Soaking in the sun horses within white fences overseeing soft hills with haystacks neatly bundled Two rocking chairs on the veranda swing hung under the porch on cool nights smoke billows from house Vestige of years gone by the ranch outliving its use a lifestyle foreign to cityfolk Grandkids out exploring a field and soon-to-be abandoned barn in plain view: Sold over the For Sale sign Submitted on October 12, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND. AP: 3rd place 2022, 3rd place 2022, Front Page Pick 2022 Posted on October 8, 2022

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Date: 10/17/2022 12:49:00 PM
This is why I adore the country "and the dog runs as it pleases"
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2022 3:12:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren ~
Date: 10/13/2022 8:24:00 PM
Happier Times! Beautiful verse; I felt like I was there.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2022 4:51:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit, Shirley.

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