The Essence of Hurt

A Christmas tree is a fake that's soon revealed, for under the tinsel, a dead tree's concealed. When a man sheds his thorns, is he not a rose wilting inside, waiting for his wounds to close? A powder keg of emotions set to blast, anger rebuffs efforts to forget the past. The core of my heart was shaken by deceit, resonating betrayal in each heartbeat. Instead of happiness, in my heart and soul, there's an emptiness that nothing can console. And while hope withers on the vine, the lies start devastating my heart as trust falls apart. Struggling to deal with anxiety and strain, my heart lies vanquished, abandoned to its pain. And overwhelmed by hurt, it's drowning in tears; floundering in an ocean of daunting fears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 10:22 PM
A most endearing write, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
White Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Men should shed their thorns, feel the depth of pain and not try to hide it. As the longer you hide, the bigger the hurt. Men often tell me that that is for women, that I am not a real man (I am gay). This pain and this struggle, this poem, it is absolutely beautiful, a 7 and a fav for me.
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Thank so much Darren, for sharing your feelings...I appreciate your continued support my friend, Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 12:39 PM
got carried away with the rails of angst well expressed, emile... straight from the poetic gut... huggs
Pinet Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Nette, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Turner Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 12:33 PM
I have lived this, Emile. Perfectly penned!
Pinet Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Daniel, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 10:54 AM
The depth of pain so very well expressed in your writing Emile. The reader can feel it through reading this piece. :)
Pinet Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Thanks Heidi, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.
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