Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

The Equinox

He was her equinox
She was spring going on summer
He was fall going on winter
Yet when they met in the middle

There was sizzle on a summer day
Equal in whit, equal in intellect
Equal in love and enthusiasm
But it was not to be _life offers plans

Not under their control  circumstances
That leads in opposite ways
Change__life is full of change
The same as water at the edge of beach

That beach   after a storm
White caps that stir up dirty sand
So life can stir us against our calm
Responsibility calls me away

Thank you God for the time off
Thank you for the time to write
Thank you for views that give inspiration
Thank you for another day

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Richard-Jamaal Keen June 9, 2010 at 9:47 PM This is wonderful, but I feel slow...what is an equinox?

Gert W. Knop June 3, 2010 at 12:57 PM Profound and thoughtful write, Sara! Yes life has always ups and downs, but there is always another day! Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Ans thank you for your kind comments...Have a nice weekend...Gert

John Loving Iii June 3, 2010 at 12:18 PM Sara, often times when i brouse the soup, i know there are times that i will look to what you have. and like this time i found a special treat. this piece was truely amazing and i had to find a special way of telling you that the poet living inside of you is a master of the art. your imagedry and wisdom combined it the words made a very though provoking piece. these are words that will live on forever. well, i just wanted you to know that your special you have the gift. and thank you for thegift

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 3, 2010 at 11:29 AM Another excellent write Sara .. full of visual and breahttaking scenes.. we are expecting a doozy of a storm right now ... so am bracing for high winds and lots of lightening and thunder... hope the power stays on... enjoyed your creative write today .. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jared Pickett June 3, 2010 at 11:24 AM It has been a while.... I felt as thought here was a void in my life without your poetry..... Excellent as always Sara..... :JP]