The Epiphany

The phone call changed everything....

As I ran into the hospital room
The tears rolled down my face.
So fragile she was,
In so much pain.
Then it hit me....
   Today could be the day I lose her,
   As they rushed her to surgery.

....Her recovery was so slow,
So painful.
At her age her body did not cooperate.
Once again it hit me....
I had to be the strong one now.
I had to take care of her.
My mother, who would never again
Be strong and independant.
As she had been her whole life.

....I had always needed her.
She had always been there for me.
Now, she needed me
And I prayed I would not let her down.




for Desiree Birdseye's "Epiphanies" contest
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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Desiree's contest "Epiphanies". Love, Carol
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January 30, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Hi Francine Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Desiree's contest. Best wishes, Kory
Sweetheart Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Congrats Francine on your big win in the Epiphanies contest with this brilliant entry ..enjoy with luv..
Mannan Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 6:41 AM
So very touching and beautiful. Many congratulations for this win.
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January 30, 2011 at 5:12 AM
congrads on your win, jhl
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:49 PM
special congrats on your fine win, francine..:) huggs, nette
Richards Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Indeed....those moments come when we reverse our roles....mother and child...Oh yes...a melancholy epiphany this is! Congratulations on your win!
Mehta Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Francine
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Yes, one day it all turns around. I'm glad I got to finally see this one from you,Francine. That's why I love the winners' circle. Sometimes I catch excellent poetry of my friends that I had somehow missed earlier. Luv, Andrea PS and a BIG congratulations!
Johnson Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 2:33 PM
A beautiful touching poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Heartfelt poetry at it's best Francine, good luck in the contest....:)
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 3:45 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Francine. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 9:17 PM
Very tender and touching write Francine.. wish u much success in the contest my friend with luv.. for an awesome piece...
Pettit Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Currently, I am in a very similar situation. You have described everything quite well in this offering. Desiree should give you some stong consideration.
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