The Engagement

Our engagement started early
One Thursday back in may
I had prepared my speech days before
Anticipating today.

Birds aware and singing
The trees are in full bloom
My lady is sleeping peacefully
Only to be awoken soon.

Breakfast made & waiting
Candles glowing with an apple scent
The sounds of Ray Charles' playing
Everything's right, it's time.

Just then her arms embrace me 
Around my torso from the back
She kissed my neck, it tickled
A grin appears I laugh

A look of shock appeared 
As I dropped one knee
Her eyes start forming tears
As she concentrates on me

With confidence I ask
" Will you be my wife?
Be with me now and in death,
Living one complete life."

"Yes!!" She said with joy
Hugging and kissing me with delight.
"I've been waiting for so long,
Your timing was just right."

I've written a little something
A verse for you to hear.
This will be my vow to you
So relax, get comfortable
And lend me your ears.

You're the air that I breathe, and the glow in my soul.
You're everything I've envisioned, there is nothing I
want more. With every passing day, and every year
that you are mine. My love for you will grow infinite,
my wife until and past the end of time. I respect
everything you stand for, I'll back you when times get
rough. The bond we share is unbreakable, so yes!!
Love is enough....

Jared Pickett
9/01/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 10:44 AM
congrats on the win and well written poem of love and commitment!
Roberts Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:46 AM
absolutely beautiful, congrats on your win
Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Jared this is simply breath taking and a delight to read. Many congratulations on your win in Catie's lovely contest >> James
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September 23, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations Jared for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 8:59 PM
So when did you present this cool love note to her, Jared? Congrats on your big win! Luv, Andrea
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September 22, 2010 at 8:22 PM
What a lovely story behind this poem, Jared. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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September 22, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. ILY Love Scarlett
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Jared
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Congrats Jared on your big win in the Love Notes contest... a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy my friend with luv... great win..luv...
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May 31, 2010 at 11:10 PM
Wow Mr. JP this is so beautiful. I hope you will soon find the right one that you need to be with you. Love Scarlett
Rivet Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 10:40 AM
that was absolutley gorgeous and i think you have done her well so if we could stand today the worlds best hand :) Brittany Rivet :)
Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 3:44 AM
Absolutely beautiful Jared, not more i can say>>James
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:38 AM
Beautiful poem of commitment to a lady, words and form just right, flowing like a river, with deliver! Sincerely Moses
Canady Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 10:13 PM
Absolutely Beautiful... May You and Your Lady Find Complete Bliss Forevermore MoonBee
Richards Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 5:58 PM
What a tender, romantic poem of true love! How lucky you both are !! Lovely write! ~Carrie
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