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The Enemy

From darkest night to early dawn The guns sound loud with no abate; The feeble sun is looking on Blood splattered fields of hate. As if desired to rise again A sudden sound from the dark; From the fields of waving grain The soaring sound of a lark. A sweet torrent of melody Was showered from the sky; A new fleet winged enemy, That can't be hushed though we try. There she flew on joyful wings; With outspread feathers of fleece, Tossing hopes of such strange things, As pleasure, joy and peace. Singer of songs, you must know, That we on earth make hell; Or is it that your song must show, That perhaps all is well? Fearless wings, fly not in vain, For they soar in a sky so blue; And we who love war's red stain, Lift eyes to see heaven too!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/3/2011 11:09:00 AM
Good morning again Elizabeth, the enemy, we are our own,,, another great one,, I have lifted many tough thoughts,, someway i hope heaven shows me the song,,enjoyed~ . have yourself a wonderful and beautiful day~ I sure will enjoy my day.. I HOPE~..;-) ~LINDA
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Date: 9/25/2011 8:39:00 AM
Damn. Incredible direction here. Excellent flow!
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Date: 9/18/2011 5:11:00 AM
Another wonderful write from your inspiring pen...Yes, we need to revisit history. We are so good at repeating it! Have a blessed day, Elizabeth. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/16/2011 7:32:00 AM
Yes...man's inhumanity to man, and all that...we never learn (history is one long list of wars), but hope springs eternal. A good, thought-provoking write. Hi Liz, I just dropped by to read. I'm not really at the Soup at the moment...computer problems. Hope to be getting a new one within the next few weeks, but until then I won't be posting any new poems. Love & best wishes, Robert.
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:19:00 AM
The promise of a world in peace. We'll sing the song and never cease. We do our best to behave our worst. From Eden's dawn we're blessed and cursed. But prophetic words will guide our way. And help us find a brighter day.
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:30:00 PM
Tremendous write clicking each part of the puzzle together for the entire view....with love....old Jack
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Date: 9/14/2011 10:11:00 PM
an electrifying write elizabeth.. the forces of each realm presented so well luv.. intense..
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:22:00 AM
many a soldiers fear has been comforted by the sound of bird song. We cannot be worthy of any god if you look through the eyes of that skylark. perhaps i will be reborn as a bird next time. great write Elizabeth
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:21:00 AM
great write
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:08:00 AM
Elizabeth, You have such a poetic heart... one that cannot be hidden. I love this poem. Kindred spirits? I would be honored to even think that we are.
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Date: 9/14/2011 7:01:00 AM
Per your suggestion, i've added "aunts" to "The Lost Musketeer". I have also replied to your most kind comments.
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Date: 9/14/2011 6:58:00 AM
Your lines feather-touch their way into the heart..even as its import is not so light..thnx for your kind comments, luv
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Date: 9/14/2011 5:09:00 AM
A great story with a serious message in it. As always, remarkably told. I especially loved the last 4 lines of the second para and the first 4 lines of the third. Brilliant write.
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:13:00 AM
am loving this one...fantastic....well written
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Date: 9/14/2011 12:32:00 AM
Another very nice poem here.Really sun is feeble compared to gunshots.Enjoyed very much...
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