The Enemy

The Enemy



He was sleeping when he felt the edge of the knife
Cold, sharp, hard against his throat.

“I am going to kill you now” the enemy said.

“Freind” said the waking sleeper
“You can kill me if you choose
“I lay here helpless at the cutting edge of your razor
“But before you spill my blood
“And leave me gurggling here in its spreading stain
“Please think on what I am about to say

The keen edge trembled and quavered
“Go on” the enemy said.

“Friend, you may kill me, end my life
“If you so choose
“But it is not me, who will die 
“But you

“I will go on, on to the eternal realms
“The next life awaits
“I am unafraid of death

“But you my friend, you will live
“And carry in your conscience this thing you did
“You will know
“You will carry this deed long after
“And forever in your immortal soul

The enemy hesitated, but a moment
Before slitting the victims throat

Such is the monumental stupidity
Of the enemy





"And against stupidity; even the Gods themselves; contend in vain" ( Issac Asimov )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/9/2009 8:07:00 AM
A grusome but honest write. There is no other word for behavior such as this than "stupidity." This is creative and faith inspiring. Wonderful work as always. You have such a beautiful gift, I always enjoy reading your poetry. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:44:00 PM
Ew, I just watched Sweeney Todd (again) and sorry but that's all I can see here, for now. Colin, what is the 5th book? I read 4 of the LOTR books twice, but am I forgetting one? This will probably be a 'duh' moment when you reply. And yes, I agree with your suggestion, would you like to share some of your endless inspiration and talent so my words will flow as from a fountain and bring enlightenment to all? I wish I could write more but I feel like there is nothing but a brick in my head :(
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:07:00 PM
Love the thought, that the enemy will carry the deed long after.....with the media frenzy that life is so cheap....we need to be reminded that life is precious....always too precious for the violence that surrounds. Deeply felt, wonderful writing!
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:44:00 AM
OMGosh you watched TROY this weekend too!! Colin what a deep look into the meaning and worth of a life.
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