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The End of the World

Snapshots of teenage melodrama: not having the sense to stay out of the rain, the latest hits broadcast over the cafeteria speakers, a night out, with boisterous boys and giggling girls in cars, first heartbreak. It seems like the end of the world - silly, isn't it? Visions of Hell: standing alone, under the driving rain, unable to find a reason to live or move - stood up, by an empty cafeteria, "you're gonna wish, you wasn't born at all", walking alone at night, taunted by shouting boys and giggling girls, "freak". The end of the world? Lights out? I'm on board.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/31/2025 4:08:00 PM
If only they realized how short those teenage were compared to the totality of their life. BUT a teenager intensely interprets those years as a definition/finality of their life. Good parents make all the difference; people need a license for everything, but any idiot can have a baby, and they do. I've sent you a soup mail. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 7/31/2025 4:06:00 PM
having taught high school for many years, I can attest to the drama and selfish propensity of teens. I don't understand them. Perhaps they're just crazy ??? :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 7/30/2025 9:04:00 PM
Me too, David. It's crazy to me. I don't know what it is to them. They probably don't know either. LOL Have a nice weekend, my friend. Bill
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David Crandall
Date: 7/31/2025 9:02:00 AM
Have a great weekend Bill!
Date: 7/30/2025 8:32:00 PM
Teens these days. They just don't want to wait 5 billion years or so for the sun to heat up, I guess. Impatient whippersnappers, lol.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/31/2025 9:02:00 AM
I guess it's a little early to be thinking about moving to Mars! :-))

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