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The End of Me

There are pieces I haven't yet shown. You see, you hear, you taste, you sense... but is it real? This is definitely not the end of me. As the water gets immersed in soothing tea, I hope your heart gets immersed in sound and feel. There are pieces I haven't yet shown, you see. And I will tend to these words that long to be, as a blacksmith polishes bronze and steel. In a lonely bliss, just my own thoughts and me. I uncage these birds, let them fly and be free; soar into cotton clouds and skies of teal, yeah, watch 'em fly from sea to shining sea. Climbing these peaks with bent back and broken knee; still stealing every sight there is to steal. This is definitely not the end of me. I believe true beauty is never easy, I may not win, but I will always deal. For there are pieces I haven't yet shown, you see. I'll give it all I got until the end of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/5/2013 11:05:00 AM
I am missing seeing you around. Hope all is oK with you, dear Tim. Make haste and return. Hugs in poetry, SuZ
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Date: 5/16/2013 9:26:00 AM
I liked this one a lot! I'm almost getting the feeling that your finally letting loose and saying what you are thinking, and that you aren't finished yet! I'm glad, never stop writing what you feel! :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/16/2013 12:27:00 PM
Though everything you said is true it's also written to encourage me when I'm on writer's block... LOL! Ideas and thoughts will come soon enough... just give it time.
Date: 4/29/2013 10:43:00 AM
Hi Tim, I should hope it's not the end of you, you have lots to say and this is as good a place as any. Drama on a drama free site, oooooooo what ever next? lol Take care, Richard, ps, can you write me something funny, just a short one will do?
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/29/2013 10:56:00 AM
Ha ha, I hope I'm not coming off as a person that's dead serious all the time. I will post some of my more comical pieces tomorrow :)
Date: 4/29/2013 6:58:00 AM
I look forward to receiving more pieces, I have always enjoyed putting puzzles together. You are providing large pieces so you are making the work easy so far. Great poem.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/29/2013 10:33:00 AM
Ha ha. If only life was just an elaborate puzzle... you and I would have already had it solved by now... lol.
Date: 4/29/2013 6:38:00 AM
Excellent write, Timothy...and very smooth.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/29/2013 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Caleb. After reading much of your work I don't take your comments lightly.
Date: 4/29/2013 5:34:00 AM
This is a tremendously written, terrific write my friend! I am in awe of this poem's splendor Timothy! Wow, such powerful words you have placed within this glorious piece, What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/29/2013 10:32:00 AM
Thanks again Russell!
Date: 4/29/2013 4:46:00 AM
- Like my poem, "Show me your face", Timothy - The real Timothy the one you really are - like it or not like it. - Very well written! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/29/2013 10:32:00 AM
Very true Anne! Above all it's important to just be yourself!

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