Stephen Mark Hluchnik Poet Free verse

The End

The sun shines
As the moon beams,

Flowers bloom on ground to cover
While the birds fly high and hover,

Tranquil is the running brook
Through a forest of trees,

Serene is the snowfall
Atop a mountain high,

As a butterfly floats
Across a rolling meadow,

A summer night's breeze
Warms two beating hearts,

Silent prayer calms the soul
As a peace instills to heal,

As baby lies in wait
A beat to a mother's womb,

In the end you realize,
That all is born for demise....

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 8, 2011 at 10:36 AM I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Stephen. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown June 22, 2010 at 10:14 AM Still a favorite Stephen. Love, Carol

Joanna Smith January 18, 2010 at 10:32 AM I think this poem is beautiful. one of the best i've read of this kind and i thought the end line was very effective, and it snapped me out of the trance your words in the rest of the poem put me into! keep it up man.

Stephen Mark Hluchnik January 17, 2010 at 1:40 PM That's the point of... "The end" guys, thanks for your comments!

Linda Witt-King January 12, 2010 at 3:48 PM Solomon makes a good point, Stephen. As I was reading your poem, I saw a celebration of life that I really related to and enjoyed. "As baby lies in wait A beat to a mother's womb" ...that's a lovely image. But I did feel a bit jolted by the last two lines. They almost denied the rest of the poem. What do you think?

Solomon Storm January 12, 2010 at 1:22 PM lose the last two lines, they don't rhyme. the rest do, a tribute to life and love. they never die.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 12, 2010 at 11:25 AM I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Stephen. I am adding it to my favorite poem list. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol