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The End

The end

It breaks through the light
Awakening night
Falling soft against the earth
Reminding us all that death
Even comes to the sun

It colors the brilliant rays of colorful
Insights with melancholy 
Despair and mourning
Grief that is black
As the stormy skies

It deafens the ear
Of one who listens for it’s
Laughter
Which you’ll never hear
For it is a silent reflection

It echoes through the mind
Reaching out in hues
Of lilac and cobalt
Coloring the atmosphere
With a gloomy hush

It is not lifeless as it seems
But protects the peace
With strong arms
Of melancholy and dread
For soon we will accompany it

In death… there is smoke
Whispering up toward the sun
Pressing in on the heart
With reminders
Of this finished love

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Date: 1/23/2021 4:42:00 AM
Death ever present for all cycles of life from the sun and moon to the tiniest of ants - you enhance your poem with the chaos depicted in your awesome pic. your poem is incredible. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/23/2021 3:45:00 AM
This thought stopped me in my thinking and made me rethink. "death Even comes to the sun" Wow! Great job!
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