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The Enchanted Forest

The woods were silent except for the shifting 
soft sounds of his hooves as they fell upon 
the forest floor. There he stood amid the mist in 
his white majestic coat calling to me to come 
to him and ride upon his back, vanish with him,
(as the sun lay dying into quiet shades of twilight)
into an unknown sacred secret realm where no 
one's footsteps could follow.

I stroked his soft warm velvet nose and felt the 
subtle flair of his nostrils breath on my hand.
When I climbed upon his back we rode 
as one as our love and trust in each other 
had slowly grown into a synergy unsurpassed.
Moonlight filtered through the verdant trees
as darkness enveloped the starry sky.
Suddenly we found ourselves in a glade
where we were surrounded by the soft glow
of tiny faeries as numerous as fireflies.

We were warmly welcomed into their sacred 
sanctuary and I felt enchanted by their sylvan 
beauty as two tiny faeries braided long strands 
of my golden hair, intertwining fragrant flowers.
I was asked if I would help to keep the forest
safe from clear cutting, and I promised I would.
I awoke to the faint sound of hoofbeats as dawn
was rising and there were pretty flowers in my hair.

12-25-18 
© Connie Marcum Wong
Poem of the Day April 4, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:28 AM
How dreamingly beautiful, dear Connie. ~Elaine
Wells Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 10:03 PM
This is a wonderful fantasy filled with vivid images that gives it the feel of a dream. Thank you Connie! Shalom and Paz! xxoo
Ravidas Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 3:06 PM
No wonder it was a poem of the day. A true poetic fantasy as it should be, wonderful and magic. And, as far as I can see, you keep your promise, Connie)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 4:03 PM
I do give to charities that helps save the forests. Thank you for your lovely comment Kurt. : )
Duncan Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Love this writing Connie. I read books like this all the time. Besides bio's & such. I have one called "I Was There Watching" :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 5:31 PM
I will go check it out Debbie. I rarely write fantasy but this just came to me. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie ; )
Dew Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 2:05 AM
Wow.. This is so beautiful!! *_*
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Thank you very much Pin. I rarely take the time to write fantasy. But this came to me one night. : )
DiMino Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Enchanting story, Connie; such a fine gift you which you share so selflessly. This is a perfectly charming, mystical tale. Outstanding read!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:16 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment Joe. It is always nice to see a visit from you. : )
May Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Beautiful write Connie, with a magical allure...hugs
Dyer Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 3:06 AM
As a vegan wiccan I can relate to this well written piece
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Thank you Malcolm. I appreciate that. I am not saying I don't believe in them as there are great mysteries in this world and in other dimensions. Mahalo, Connie : )
Lindley Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 3:57 PM
This is pure poetry my friend. Every word coming from imagination, spirit and heart! Wise choice it was for POTD.. ADDING TO MY FAV LIST AND POEMS ON FAERIES I'VE WRITTEN MYSELF AT LEAST HALF DOZEN TIMES.. SUPER 7...
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Thank you for such a lovely comment Robert. It means a lot that you faved this. I hope you are doing well my friend. Blessings, Connie ; )
Laurie Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 11:03 PM
G'day Connie ... another wonderful verse from your pen and mind Connie. You have taken me on this enchanted journey - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Lindsay. I almost never write fantasy. I was surprised that this poem is so popular. I appreciate your encouraging words. ; )
Bocsa Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Congrat.This is a special poem reminding me of a fairy tale by Mihai Sadoveanu: The Fancy`s Fairy (in The Wonderful Grove).
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Oh, I am not familiar with him. Thank you for your nice comment Ovidiu. ; )
Hicks Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Back again to say congrats on POTD. It really was a nice detour into fantasy :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Thank you very much Timothy. ; )
Woods    Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Such a captivating tale that holds on to the reader from start to finish. Congratulations on your POTD.
Dalei Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Hi connie, Hearty congratulation for selection of ur poem for POTD. It is one of my favorite poem. You deserve this...........hugs
Sergi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Hi Connie: I can only say that I WAS enchanted by your poem! Great POTD!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:07 PM
It is so nice to hear from you Ralph. Thank you very much. ; )
Raven Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Hi Connie, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, a well deserved accolade i must say. I do Love fantasy writes and this one has such a gentle flow, an enchanting write of the enchanted forest. This is an excellent work, well deserving of a seven rating. Hugs....Mike.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Mike, thank you very much. April is Poetry Month and I am thrilled with the honor! Cheers, Connie
Dutta Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Wonderful Write Connie. Congrats. Anisha D
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Such a lovely, enchanting poem, Connie. Congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor! Hugs, Sandra
Williams Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Beautifully written. An enjoyable poem to read. Congrats to you Connie on your POTD.
Horne Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:48 AM
love this enchanting write
Dalei Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Wonderful presentation "darkness enveloped the starry sky"-- nicely penned. You have been enlisted in my fav list.......hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:44 AM
- Beautiful written, Connie :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Love the imagination in this piece Connie, Congratulations on POTD, You deserve it. Peace my friend:)
Nance Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Great story, :) Grats on poem of the day Connie !! :)
Quigley Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Beautiful! Drew me right in.
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