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The Empty Shell

Sometimes I forget to breathe In this solitude I try hard to remember My way back home Maybe I never had My own nest I just borrowed The others' As a young cuckoo Sick with Alzheimer Snow clears the shadows And any trace Of heavy steps So I can not return At my shell With rancid curtains From a cobweb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/23/2012 8:06:00 AM
well woven... has a bit of Eliot's The Waste Land... like the way you capture disintegration and discordance of man... thanks for stopping by my poems... Love... Angel
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Date: 12/22/2012 7:10:00 AM
WHoa! Poignant write - amazingly done. I love how you've used imagery to bring out the angst brought about by uncertainty and confusion. Your development of the theme is on point. And that Alzheimer reference just strikes at the heart. Very well penned Berinde!
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