The Embrace of This Child

There is no hint, that this child of three
Could comprehend..
With his unknowing, smiling face,
With a cowlick in his hair, freckles here and there 
Who takes the air from my lungs, at a glance
Skin glistening, pink and rosy from the sun,
As he comes bounding through the door,
Mud on small shoes and face
Not an inkling or a trace..
Of any clue of the pace 
How my heart beats,... how it swells
The way my love wraps around 
His small body so tightly, that he would gasp.
This adoration that I feel....

    But of course, I don't squeeze tightly.
      I must hold my love for him
        With more restraint,
          Keep my arms encircled in a more gentle embrace,
             For he wouldn't understand how much love
                His sweet presence stirs up the air I breathe
                   This child, this precious son of my daughter
                      Will never know the joy
                          He has brought into my life






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Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie luv xx
Squyres Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 9:07 AM
They never realize that...how sweet and loving it is to hold them grands and watch them play. Love it !! Congrats on a well deserved win !!
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:37 PM
WOW, fantastic, and I would not expect less from you. Congrats on the win, CArrie. I can really feel your love for that baby in this one.
A   Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 7:23 PM
CarrieCongratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA
George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 4:26 AM
Carrie, this stirred up my emotions until they over-flowed and ran down my cheeks. So moving and going straight to my favorite list. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your honored success. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Oh how he will be embaressed LOL when Grandma reads this outloud at Christmas! So nice to have a write like this to revisit that joy! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Fahey Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 4:18 PM
What a lovely Grandmother you are to that precious gift from God. And, you are a precious gift to him, as well! Congrats on your win! I'm puttin' this in my faves. I have a few more years before grandchildren, but this is a beauty worth saving! Ellen
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 10:04 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win in the contest
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Your love for your grandson is described in such a delightful way, Carrie. Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
Mannan Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Such a beautiful dedication to your grandchild. He is really very lucky to have you as a grandmama. Many heartiest congrats for this super win.
Mehta Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:07 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this vibrant write and elegant entry so special.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
Tacito Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:06 AM
Carrie, a beautiful & touching piece. :)
K. Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:10 AM
This is just the sweetest poem, Carrie :) I could definitely feel the love that you have for your grandson and I really loved the formatting of your poem too--something like being swept away in that embrace! Very nice & congrats on your win with this--btw thank you so much for all your comments in my poems, and especially about my poem about my brother--your words touched my heart--thank you :) --nikko
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Ohhhhhhhh I love it!!! And they won't know until they have their own child! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest "A Warm Embrace" Carrie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:35 PM
So much love here it oozes out. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Congrats on the 4th place win
Green Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Brilliant and heartfelt, congrats!
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Congrats on 4th win, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Warm Embrace contest with this wonderful write .. a truly beautiful win to enjoy for a lovely write.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
Strand Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 3:06 AM
Congrats on your succes in Debbie's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 8:06 PM
This is so loving. It is amazing how we grandmas cherish our grandchildren. Hannah is my great-grandchild. Her beautiful mother is my granddaughter and thank you for your comments and congratulations to you also. Love, Joyce
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