The Elemental's Confession As a Peace Offering

"The Elemental’s Confession as a Peace Offering"
In the moment I lost my head my hands tied without voice I wasn’t crucified I was looking for some kind of release from the solitary confines of a confessional habit that was reclaiming an unknown peace bare legged, yet not running with the violins soaring in a sore heart I was elemental, some unknown mysterious being suspended inanimate in shades of dark amber immaculate, impaired and too late crackling through the cameo potentate black capsuled and swallowed by bitter smiles with my precious time drowned in captured glass, scrying, peeling back all the layers a confession waiting unholy and holy escaping a small mind metronomed and pulse throbbing towards you telepathically, my sonar to this day, bleeds forth encircling your heart it is where I worship it is my church bleeding tired heart beats like a cathedral organ pipes smoking, a tortured phantom’s hymn of an unending time it would seem, within the brutish Bardo, Vulgate immersed mind staked in the fire, still, passionate and burning disconsolate restlessly waiting for your confession to me, that never came to finally be opened to finally be set free (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
"I burned your picture last night just to see you move. smoke illuminating from those flashing signs"
1. Habit 2. Confession 3. Bardo 4. Vulgate 5. Elemental 6. Potentate 7. Immaculate, impaired

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/30/2022 7:49:00 PM
"Where Is My Mind?" / The Pixies (Orchestra Tribute) https://youtu.be/V33mU0Knik0
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Date: 4/28/2020 8:45:00 PM
The contrast between being chaste and sensual is a potent image. I made the mistake of being attracted to the first. It made for a passionless marriage. Exceptional poetry. Not that I expected anything less.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/28/2020 9:34:00 PM
You win some you lose some Lamour'eux...it's all a journey. Some trip, regards Dr Lovejoy. x
Date: 4/28/2020 7:50:00 PM
and set free you shall Bee...you seduce the mind, take it on a journey and don't let go
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/28/2020 9:32:00 PM
Your imagination is astounding...you wish it was your middle name...keep dreamin'....that is the best laugh, probably the first of many today. More like Johnny English.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 4/28/2020 8:28:00 PM
Danger is my middle name x
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/28/2020 8:12:00 PM
some may say, setting me free, might be a dangerous thing...
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