The Effrontery in Black

Life is so very important, a potent
inhale and exhale; even in the womb;
and who is he who dares to take life…

Who walked on the Galileean sea?
Whose feet felt the deep’s waters,
but stayed atop the rambunctious waves?
After all, who created the sea and
its boundaries? We say His name,

even when we breathe in and out.
So who dares to take out what He
has created - the effrontery in black.

Blessed are the peacemakers,
the conscientious martyrs -
those who hold up the Word of God,
not the coward’s knife, gun, or hate.

Blood mixed with tears on the cross.
*He was crushed for our iniquities;
the punishment that brought us peace
was on Him* - you know His name.

This was peace made between
God and man; peace that riles up
all of hell. Some embrace this peace.

If you remember anyone’s name,
the martyr, likewise, would have
you recall the name of Jesus Christ.
The martyr closed his eyes and
opened them up to the one who gives life.

*from Holy Bible, book of Isaiah chapter 53
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Greenhough Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 8:30 PM
This goes to my heart. I am in upheaval from the recent violence. Your poem gives an answer that we need. Faith gives structure to lives.
Gasun Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 10:48 AM
A gorgeous uplifting poem my dear poet friend Kim. I especially love the two end lines: the marty closed his eyes and opened them up to the ones who gives life...very comforting. Prayers to those who suffer. Thanks for sharing this precious gem. God bless you always. Belated thanks for your lovely visit on my poem too. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, Len!
DiMino Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 3:11 PM
Poignant, Kim; you get a FAV! We pray for Kirk's family. May the Lord comfort them in their unbearable grief. I join you in prayer.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 4:42 PM
Yes, praying. Glad they caught the guy.
Rodgers Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Dear Kim, it feels like your faith is on fire, spoken with courage and conviction. It’s not just words on a page, it’s testimony, and it carries your heart for God so clearly. Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 4:42 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:38 PM
'Who is he who dares to take life?' ~ A powerful question, Kim. Needs no written answer...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Thank you, Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:07 PM
I agree with Yann...a powerful and kind homage. "Who is he who dare takes a life" those words brought tears to my eyes as I thought of Charlie Kirk...a sad day for this country.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Truly it is then I saw my h.s. Classmate’s name roll across the screen…tears (hero of 911 - firefighter turned around to help)
Rolland Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:21 PM
very sensitive homage, inspiring too, blessings,
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Hind Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Absolutely beautiful, and inspirational, Kim!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 2:02 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Thanks for adding the note about, Isaiah chapter 53. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Paula!
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