The Effrontery in Black

Life is so very important, a potent
inhale and exhale; even in the womb;
and who is he who dares to take life…

Who walked on the Galileean sea?
Whose feet felt the deep’s waters,
but stayed atop the rambunctious waves?
After all, who created the sea and
its boundaries? We say His name,

even when we breathe in and out.
So who dares to take out what He
has created - the effrontery in black.

Blessed are the peacemakers,
the conscientious martyrs -
those who hold up the Word of God,
not the coward’s knife, gun, or hate.

Blood mixed with tears on the cross.
*He was crushed for our iniquities;
the punishment that brought us peace
was on Him* - you know His name.

This was peace made between
God and man; peace that riles up
all of hell. Some embrace this peace.

If you remember anyone’s name,
the martyr, likewise, would have
you recall the name of Jesus Christ.
The martyr closed his eyes and
opened them up to the one who gives life.

*from Holy Bible, book of Isaiah chapter 53

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Date: 9/11/2025 6:38:00 PM
'Who is he who dares to take life?' ~ A powerful question, Kim. Needs no written answer...
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Date: 9/11/2025 5:07:00 PM
I agree with Yann...a powerful and kind homage. "Who is he who dare takes a life" those words brought tears to my eyes as I thought of Charlie Kirk...a sad day for this country.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2025 6:01:00 PM
Truly it is then I saw my h.s. Classmate’s name roll across the screen…tears (hero of 911 - firefighter turned around to help)
Date: 9/11/2025 4:21:00 PM
very sensitive homage, inspiring too, blessings,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2025 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 9/11/2025 4:03:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, and inspirational, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2025 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 9/11/2025 2:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Thanks for adding the note about, Isaiah chapter 53. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2025 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
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