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The Eel

Slithering in the depthless waters We find the eel—never blinking Rarely has he seen the sun Encompassed with mistrust He’s a soloist of the deep Calm burning in his soul, We find his home Serenely built on the quietude of his spirit He melts into his cold tunnels He’s the keeper of the ocean’s secrets Frowning and gaping He lifts his slimy head Watching the strangers swimming along Catching interest in one or two Only to assist them in knowing—he’s the devourer of whomever he pleases to overthrow He’s so unobtrusive, this little creature Yet fire seems to burn from within As if by coming a little closer… He’d reveal his secrets from beneath the fin In awe the eel will slither back in his throne of emptiness Silent desperation was never described so discreetly Yet he conquers all completely And survives longer than his kind could ever appreciate Soloist of the sea I doubt you desire me to observe Your slimy, despicable existence But you are worthy of acknowledgement— Much worthier than I myself For truly, my eely presence in these lines Is diminutive against your profound, human-like indifference

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/24/2016 12:22:00 PM
The soloist of the deep in his throne of emptiness! How fascinatingly ominous. As Scott says below, one doesn't think much about the eel (except when it's served in sushi ... hehe) That's what make your poetry great ... being able to write the off-the-wall, with a sense of intrigue, but still with a connected-ness to the everyday. Say what you want, but I enjoyed your eely presence ...
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:08:00 AM
What an awesome last line. You've made me think about eels more than I ever have before. Not sure that I should thank you for that. Great read though.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/15/2014 11:00:00 PM
Thanks so much!!! ~Laura
Date: 1/3/2012 10:56:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2011 9:15:00 PM
Dear Laura, Outstanding Write YOU have a way of intriguing the reader to want to read more I have made YOU one of my Favorite POETS LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/20/2011 2:30:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed this one - it is a verse that means quite a lot to me...

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